Give Cthulhu Some Immortality Shock

I have finished subscribing. The idea of ​​this book is actually quite novel, and the structure is very clear, but it still lacks some points. It is too straightforward and lacks some twists. Although there is a lack of magic and Taoist culture, there are no big mistakes in the writing. Although I am not an expert, there are some friends who know and are engaged in related things. If you want to know more, you can also talk in the follow-up, such as the calculation method of Xiaoliu, the items to retrieve the lightning strike wood, or some formulas. Then the pace of the book is very fast, but the realm cannot keep up. It is true that the protagonist's strength and IQ are online, but it is still first level, which has some impact on today's fast-paced novels. My suggestion is that it is best to hurry up and break through once recently, otherwise it will be uncomfortable to break through the realm too quickly. After all, it is recognized that it is difficult to break through every time.

The content setting is still very attractive, and the subject matter can be said to be relatively new. But it can also be seen that the author's experience in writing books is still a bit lacking. He should be a novice. For example, when it comes to narrative, you can guess the subsequent results just by looking at the beginning. But it's pretty good for a novice author to be able to write these. Suggestions for improvement: You can try to make the content less straightforward and add some points that require readers to think. For example, the part about Father Oga is a bit not well written. The mysterious man who has been laid out for so long has ended up being admitted by himself. The above are personal thoughts and opinions, improvements and criticisms are welcome. 👍It seems pretty cool so far. The end of the novel is a cool article, come on

It's a very novel subject matter, at least it's to my liking. I'll vote for you with all my monthly votes. I'll vote for you all. Updates will be posted soon! (Where is the protagonist's girlfriend? Where is the girlfriend? Where is the little octopus girlfriend? There is no interaction, just like the tool man)

Solve the case? Detective? I can't stand it anymore after reading Chapter 60 or 70! The overall feeling is that I am doing tasks and not practicing! The Seventy-Two Disciples of Disaster have been seriously weakened. In such a dangerous world, the protagonist is not thinking like a normal person if he still wants to take advantage of dangerous events! After escaping from death several times, he still acted like nothing happened and continued to be lazy! The waves can't rise again, damn, there's nothing I can say! I can't stand it anymore!

Is there a female protagonist? Single or multiple?

Your hero's name always reminds me of me

Reading doesn't feel very smooth, it feels a bit weird

I want to ask, can Cthulhu destroy the planet? Or can it destroy the universe?

It looks very boring and lacks passion. Without passion, it also lacks a sense of fantasy and mystery.