Swordsman: Unifying the World Begins with Restoring Magic Skills
by Jenny Rocket
About This Novel
Zhang Yuan wore magic glasses and traveled through the Swordsman Jianghu, and saved Dongfang Bubai with a backhand. Dongfang Bubai: Xiao Yuanzi, everyone knows that I am the best in martial arts. If you pretend to be me but don't learn from Sunflower, your life will be in danger. Zhang Yuan: It's okay, I'll fix it. Two months later, Zhang Yuan emerged from the border with a full beard and looked like a ghost! Dongfang Bubai: Is he really a genius? Fangzheng: Amitabha, Master Zhang, and Lao Na concealed things about the Yi Jin Jing that cannot be understood without using Buddhism to decipher my appearance when they made the bet. I am afraid that you can only sigh with regret for the rest of your life. Zhang Yuan: Let me fix it. In front of the three major sects, Zhang Yuan's inner strength was so perfect that he could open a two-foot wall of energy! Fang Zheng: I am your Buddha... Ren Woxing: Brother Zhang, I forgot to tell you that the Star Absorbing Technique has a fatal flaw. After practicing it, unless you beg me for advice, your true energy will go retrograde and die! Zhang Yuan: I also forgot to tell you that I fixed it. After forty moves, Ren Woxing was sucked away from his entire body and turned into a fitness tool! Ren Woxing: It's broken, let him practice it! Zhang Yuan: I think it's like this. As long as we can unify the world, all the factions have a lot to consider. PS: The early stage is the protagonist's own growth and career line, and it is relatively late to enter the main line of the original work.
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Official(3)Scraped 12d ago
Why did Zhang Yuan call Qu Feiyan Gazi?
The fighting is good, but the rest of it is too stretched.
It contributed a lot of wonderful fighting scenes, and I watched them through this. It has a lot of imagination, but readers may not be able to hold on until the answer is revealed. It can be regarded as a magic-reformed fanfic that incorporates many Jin Yongbie novels into the background of Xiaoao. Although the author said that the main plot is how the male protagonist dominates the world, it is more like a road movie. The male protagonist runs around the Miao desert and snowy mountains, but it fails to depict the scenery, which is a pity. The heroine, Qu Feiyan, is more developed because she is too young. The relationship between the two of them is handled well and it is not too awkward. However, there are many female co-stars who are not clear about it. Yue Lingshan has a crush on her, she and Lan Fenghuang have already joined forces, and the original characters have children (although it is a trade), so it is difficult to deal with it. There are many shortcomings, which are quite serious. The protagonist comes from the Sun and Moon God Sect and is deeply appreciated by Dongfang Bubai. The appearance of the original Dongfang Invincible... I can't compliment it. The description in the novel is not difficult to read. I really couldn't imagine what it would be like, so I made up my mind about Aunt Snake. Not to mention it was quite appropriate? The early content of the book was too fragmentary, and it was obvious that it was meant to provide the protagonist with skills, but later on, it was filled with supermodels and quickly suppressed the level. This is the limitation of a world with low martial arts. The protagonist becomes high martial arts when he levels up, and his combat effectiveness collapses as soon as he writes about it. The protagonist's camp is vacillating. I was from the Sun and Moon Sect in the beginning, so hooking up with the Five Poisons Sect was okay. But they are both Japanese and Tubo, Westerners and Jurchens. When I saw the ending, I knew it was to create momentum and to get others to take action, but the impression was very poor. This is martial arts, especially Jin Yong's martial arts. Generally, the protagonist will be bound to a sect and be loyal to his own camp. In the book, the protagonist looks very clownish when running around, especially when he enters the palace later in the Jurchen phalanx? There is not enough suspense to hook the readers. The first and middle stages are very confusing, and most of them are original plots that have nothing to do with the original content, so readers can easily lose interest. Many important characters are short-lived. Ren Yingying got offline a few times after she came out, and Ren Woxing and Dongfang Bubai were locked in a life-or-death duel. From this point of view, the only thing that can be used seems to be fighting scenes. The matchup against Dongfang Invincible was quite fun to watch. I hope the author can write better works in the future
It feels a bit superficial. The limitations of this golden finger are a bit large. The restoration should not only be the original technique. If you know the principles of the technique, write it directly, and then repair it, can it become a real magic technique? For example: Sunflower Book, visualize the blazing sun, can you visualize the golden crow, ten days in the same sky, or change the ten yangs into nine yangs and one yin, or can you repair it by combining the advantages of other exercises, or can you repair and write the Six Thief Immortal Fus by combining the effects of Zhuangzi's sage thieves and martial arts meridians and acupuncture points on the six internal organs, or can you repair and compile the Golden Light Curse and the Five Thunder Techniques based on the mutual generation and restraint of the five elements of the Golden Light Divine Curse and the internal strength of the five internal organs...
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Official(3)Scraped 12d ago
Why did Zhang Yuan call Qu Feiyan Gazi?
The fighting is good, but the rest of it is too stretched.
It contributed a lot of wonderful fighting scenes, and I watched them through this. It has a lot of imagination, but readers may not be able to hold on until the answer is revealed. It can be regarded as a magic-reformed fanfic that incorporates many Jin Yongbie novels into the background of Xiaoao. Although the author said that the main plot is how the male protagonist dominates the world, it is more like a road movie. The male protagonist runs around the Miao desert and snowy mountains, but it fails to depict the scenery, which is a pity. The heroine, Qu Feiyan, is more developed because she is too young. The relationship between the two of them is handled well and it is not too awkward. However, there are many female co-stars who are not clear about it. Yue Lingshan has a crush on her, she and Lan Fenghuang have already joined forces, and the original characters have children (although it is a trade), so it is difficult to deal with it. There are many shortcomings, which are quite serious. The protagonist comes from the Sun and Moon God Sect and is deeply appreciated by Dongfang Bubai. The appearance of the original Dongfang Invincible... I can't compliment it. The description in the novel is not difficult to read. I really couldn't imagine what it would be like, so I made up my mind about Aunt Snake. Not to mention it was quite appropriate? The early content of the book was too fragmentary, and it was obvious that it was meant to provide the protagonist with skills, but later on, it was filled with supermodels and quickly suppressed the level. This is the limitation of a world with low martial arts. The protagonist becomes high martial arts when he levels up, and his combat effectiveness collapses as soon as he writes about it. The protagonist's camp is vacillating. I was from the Sun and Moon Sect in the beginning, so hooking up with the Five Poisons Sect was okay. But they are both Japanese and Tubo, Westerners and Jurchens. When I saw the ending, I knew it was to create momentum and to get others to take action, but the impression was very poor. This is martial arts, especially Jin Yong's martial arts. Generally, the protagonist will be bound to a sect and be loyal to his own camp. In the book, the protagonist looks very clownish when running around, especially when he enters the palace later in the Jurchen phalanx? There is not enough suspense to hook the readers. The first and middle stages are very confusing, and most of them are original plots that have nothing to do with the original content, so readers can easily lose interest. Many important characters are short-lived. Ren Yingying got offline a few times after she came out, and Ren Woxing and Dongfang Bubai were locked in a life-or-death duel. From this point of view, the only thing that can be used seems to be fighting scenes. The matchup against Dongfang Invincible was quite fun to watch. I hope the author can write better works in the future
It feels a bit superficial. The limitations of this golden finger are a bit large. The restoration should not only be the original technique. If you know the principles of the technique, write it directly, and then repair it, can it become a real magic technique? For example: Sunflower Book, visualize the blazing sun, can you visualize the golden crow, ten days in the same sky, or change the ten yangs into nine yangs and one yin, or can you repair it by combining the advantages of other exercises, or can you repair and write the Six Thief Immortal Fus by combining the effects of Zhuangzi's sage thieves and martial arts meridians and acupuncture points on the six internal organs, or can you repair and compile the Golden Light Curse and the Five Thunder Techniques based on the mutual generation and restraint of the five elements of the Golden Light Divine Curse and the internal strength of the five internal organs...
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