
When People Are in Douluo, What is Wuhun? What is Luckin Coffee?
by Be Careful
About This Novel
[Dou Er Fan + Golden Finger + Wuhun Luckin Coffee] The food-type martial soul was awakened at the beginning, still in the Douluo Continent in the Peerless Tang Sect timeline. Brothers were finished, and they were useless. Wait, what do you mean my martial spirit is Luckin Coffee? Innate soul power level 9.9? The ultimate ice martial soul? A cup of coffee is half a cup of ice, and the ice has not melted after drinking the coffee. Huo Yuhao: Drink the bitterest American food and receive the most severe beatings. Ma Xiaotao: There is no evil fire that a cup of raw coconut latte cannot suppress. If there is, have another cup. Xu Sanshi: 9.9 For a cup of coffee. Senior Bai is really... Your copper soul coin has a face value of 0.1 Yuan? Amynos! ... With Bai Ran's second martial spirit "Mixue Ice City" suddenly awakening one day. Since then, a strange rumor about the rules has spread in Douluo Continent: next to every Luckin Coffee, there will be a Mixue Ice City, even in dangerous places like the Star Dou Forest.
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Official(385)Scraped 2d ago
To talk about the trouble that the Dai Huabin incident was not handled well, let's first read the original work.
At present, the Jiang Nannan incident has been changed, and the author has also said that if you don't lick San, you will have to lick Huo. One code is the same, and if you write well, you will praise it and if you write poorly, you will give feedback. What I want to talk about now is the incident of Dai Huabin. To be honest, the plot of Dai Huabin written by the author is very consistent with the original work. In the original work, after Huo Yuhao and Wang Dong were assassinated by Dai Huabin, Shrek just sent the assassins back to the Dai Mansion, and Dai Huabin received almost no substantive punishment. Earlier, he said that Dai Huabin would not be allowed to enter the inner courtyard, but later he was allowed to enter the inner courtyard, which means that the original work Huo Yuhao suffered in vain. This paragraph in the original book is very clear. It is said that Shrek was afraid of the Star Luo Empire and suppressed this matter. He said that he could not be an enemy of the Star Luo Empire for the sake of two students. At this time, Huo Yuhao is still a core disciple. Isn't Wang Dong's background in the Haotian Sect more powerful than that of the protagonist? The ending can be like this. The plot written by the author is very consistent with the mentality of the original Shrek. I also posted the picture.
If you want to oppose Tang Dynasty, then oppose Tang Dynasty. Can you not make Shrek look so retarded?
Will Xuanzi tell Moon about the protagonist's situation? Even if Dai Huabin is crippled, will Shrek still help the Dai family to seek justice? Moreover, writing the uncle as a food-based soul master who has been working as a chef at Shrek and has the opportunity to be awarded the title of Douluo, isn't this true? Huo Yuhao has no background and Wang Dong is from the Haotian Sect. They may not join Shrek. If the protagonist is inappropriate from Shrek's perspective, they will definitely join Shrek in the future? Moreover, the protagonist's first soul ring is already a ten thousand year soul ring, and he is level 28 at the age of 6 (don't tell me Munn can't tell the protagonist's level). Can this stand up to Dai Huabin, who will definitely return to the Dai family in the future?
Two major poisonous points (you can choose after watching it, whether you want to continue reading)
The first big poisonous point: The protagonist's uncle is a food-type Contra, he is still level 87, and he is still very young. Basically, he will break through the title Douluo in the future. As a result, he arranged a second-hand Jiang Nannan in Chapter 33. The second most poisonous point: the protagonist was attacked, and then most people saw it, and it was Dai Huabin who took action first. As a result, you told me that you would force a Contra to sign a contract of betrayal for the sake of a Soul Lord. What's even more outrageous is that you told me that you have already practiced Contra and have been in the inner courtyard for so many years, but the protagonist's uncle is not from Shrek? Could it be outsourcing? If you want to design something far away from Shrek Academy, I think it's okay, but it can't be so ugly.
It's okay in the early stage, but crazy in the later stage.
First of all, the protagonist's uncle is not that awesome, he is just a chef. Even if he hopes to become a Titled Douluo in the food department in the future, that's all. He brags about his uncle every day and treats everyone with respect. His uncle is also a big name. Do you think he can survive? Then you write a highly toxic plot like Ma Xiaotao to get the male protagonist. If it weren't for the protective shield, the male protagonist would be killed on the spot without compensation. He would still have to contribute, and if nothing happens, he would be taken into the harem. Is she so poisonous that she would die? If the previous plot wasn't interesting, I would give it 1 star.
Douluo fans who have a cowardly protagonist will not do well.
In the latest chapter, Dai Huabin assassinates the protagonist, who is signed on the head by Munn to sell himself. I know it's because the protagonist is too young (6∽7 years old), and the only way to change the map is through external force. But the way you change the map can only make people feel disgusted. Write a fan, The protagonist is either always happy and happy, Either it is suppressed from the beginning and can be released occasionally. Some idiot kicks you in the middle. How do you write this?
The opportunity given to [url=bn]Huo Yuhao[/url] is not enough, is it?
I thought that after the Shrek incident, Huo Yuhao took the opportunity to take away the disaster and blocked the incident, the author, you would have a better memory, but you are really stubborn! The original work clearly states that the Tianmeng Ice Silkworm's entire vitality is only the living gold the size of tears, and you still gave it to Huo Yuhao like the original work. Originally, the rest of the plot was watery and boring, and the main character's plot was too lame and just like playing house. Obviously the three-eyed golden beast has the ultimate light and fire attributes. Even if it still doesn't work, with Gu Yuena's help, I said before that the protagonist gave up giving it to the three-eyed golden beast, so that's okay, but in the end, he gave up and gave it to Huo Yuhao with 3 million gold soul coins. Author, are you trying to lick Huo Yuhao? Is it enough? 3 Million was picked up by Huo Yuhao. No wonder the protagonist was allowed to time travel behind Huo Yuhao. If no one complained about Ice Emperor and that time, would they also give it to Huo Yuhao? Originally, the subsequent plot was watery and boring, and there were surprises from time to time. Except for the fact that the protagonist's soul ring was sacrificed by a soul beast, most of the opportunities in the original book were still Huo Yuhao's, so why travel through time? Why not change the title of the book to Bai Ran's journey through Douluo Continent and become a waste.
What are you writing about in Chapter 33? The left and right brains interact with each other, right? You think Jiang Nannan is a loser. If you don't want it yourself, you'll introduce it to your uncle instead. You're really lucky to be your uncle🙃
unbelievable
The author also knows that there is something wrong with the section recommended by Jiang Nannan? Don't write too outrageously. Don't confuse yourself. Even though it has been changed, many people have seen it.
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Official(385)Scraped 2d ago
To talk about the trouble that the Dai Huabin incident was not handled well, let's first read the original work.
At present, the Jiang Nannan incident has been changed, and the author has also said that if you don't lick San, you will have to lick Huo. One code is the same, and if you write well, you will praise it and if you write poorly, you will give feedback. What I want to talk about now is the incident of Dai Huabin. To be honest, the plot of Dai Huabin written by the author is very consistent with the original work. In the original work, after Huo Yuhao and Wang Dong were assassinated by Dai Huabin, Shrek just sent the assassins back to the Dai Mansion, and Dai Huabin received almost no substantive punishment. Earlier, he said that Dai Huabin would not be allowed to enter the inner courtyard, but later he was allowed to enter the inner courtyard, which means that the original work Huo Yuhao suffered in vain. This paragraph in the original book is very clear. It is said that Shrek was afraid of the Star Luo Empire and suppressed this matter. He said that he could not be an enemy of the Star Luo Empire for the sake of two students. At this time, Huo Yuhao is still a core disciple. Isn't Wang Dong's background in the Haotian Sect more powerful than that of the protagonist? The ending can be like this. The plot written by the author is very consistent with the mentality of the original Shrek. I also posted the picture.
If you want to oppose Tang Dynasty, then oppose Tang Dynasty. Can you not make Shrek look so retarded?
Will Xuanzi tell Moon about the protagonist's situation? Even if Dai Huabin is crippled, will Shrek still help the Dai family to seek justice? Moreover, writing the uncle as a food-based soul master who has been working as a chef at Shrek and has the opportunity to be awarded the title of Douluo, isn't this true? Huo Yuhao has no background and Wang Dong is from the Haotian Sect. They may not join Shrek. If the protagonist is inappropriate from Shrek's perspective, they will definitely join Shrek in the future? Moreover, the protagonist's first soul ring is already a ten thousand year soul ring, and he is level 28 at the age of 6 (don't tell me Munn can't tell the protagonist's level). Can this stand up to Dai Huabin, who will definitely return to the Dai family in the future?
Two major poisonous points (you can choose after watching it, whether you want to continue reading)
The first big poisonous point: The protagonist's uncle is a food-type Contra, he is still level 87, and he is still very young. Basically, he will break through the title Douluo in the future. As a result, he arranged a second-hand Jiang Nannan in Chapter 33. The second most poisonous point: the protagonist was attacked, and then most people saw it, and it was Dai Huabin who took action first. As a result, you told me that you would force a Contra to sign a contract of betrayal for the sake of a Soul Lord. What's even more outrageous is that you told me that you have already practiced Contra and have been in the inner courtyard for so many years, but the protagonist's uncle is not from Shrek? Could it be outsourcing? If you want to design something far away from Shrek Academy, I think it's okay, but it can't be so ugly.
It's okay in the early stage, but crazy in the later stage.
First of all, the protagonist's uncle is not that awesome, he is just a chef. Even if he hopes to become a Titled Douluo in the food department in the future, that's all. He brags about his uncle every day and treats everyone with respect. His uncle is also a big name. Do you think he can survive? Then you write a highly toxic plot like Ma Xiaotao to get the male protagonist. If it weren't for the protective shield, the male protagonist would be killed on the spot without compensation. He would still have to contribute, and if nothing happens, he would be taken into the harem. Is she so poisonous that she would die? If the previous plot wasn't interesting, I would give it 1 star.
Douluo fans who have a cowardly protagonist will not do well.
In the latest chapter, Dai Huabin assassinates the protagonist, who is signed on the head by Munn to sell himself. I know it's because the protagonist is too young (6∽7 years old), and the only way to change the map is through external force. But the way you change the map can only make people feel disgusted. Write a fan, The protagonist is either always happy and happy, Either it is suppressed from the beginning and can be released occasionally. Some idiot kicks you in the middle. How do you write this?
The opportunity given to [url=bn]Huo Yuhao[/url] is not enough, is it?
I thought that after the Shrek incident, Huo Yuhao took the opportunity to take away the disaster and blocked the incident, the author, you would have a better memory, but you are really stubborn! The original work clearly states that the Tianmeng Ice Silkworm's entire vitality is only the living gold the size of tears, and you still gave it to Huo Yuhao like the original work. Originally, the rest of the plot was watery and boring, and the main character's plot was too lame and just like playing house. Obviously the three-eyed golden beast has the ultimate light and fire attributes. Even if it still doesn't work, with Gu Yuena's help, I said before that the protagonist gave up giving it to the three-eyed golden beast, so that's okay, but in the end, he gave up and gave it to Huo Yuhao with 3 million gold soul coins. Author, are you trying to lick Huo Yuhao? Is it enough? 3 Million was picked up by Huo Yuhao. No wonder the protagonist was allowed to time travel behind Huo Yuhao. If no one complained about Ice Emperor and that time, would they also give it to Huo Yuhao? Originally, the subsequent plot was watery and boring, and there were surprises from time to time. Except for the fact that the protagonist's soul ring was sacrificed by a soul beast, most of the opportunities in the original book were still Huo Yuhao's, so why travel through time? Why not change the title of the book to Bai Ran's journey through Douluo Continent and become a waste.
What are you writing about in Chapter 33? The left and right brains interact with each other, right? You think Jiang Nannan is a loser. If you don't want it yourself, you'll introduce it to your uncle instead. You're really lucky to be your uncle🙃
unbelievable
The author also knows that there is something wrong with the section recommended by Jiang Nannan? Don't write too outrageously. Don't confuse yourself. Even though it has been changed, many people have seen it.










