Big Escort System

There should be a system space where you can put what you draw, otherwise it will always appear next to you, which is not good.

There is a problem in Chapter 24. Doesn't he have a space bag? Why not use it? It only contains 2 books. Besides, there is no space in the system. Obvious bug

If you don't develop the protagonist's character well, the book will quickly become unpopular. It's best to be more decisive in killing. If the protagonist is too indecisive, readers won't buy your book. Be strong when you should be strong, but don't be stubborn when you shouldn't be strong.

Readers who are reading please comment...

The description of the protagonist in the first few chapters is not particularly ideal, especially in Chapter 9. I basically skipped the entire chapter. The content is not very related to the current plot. It may be used later, but it feels too detailed. Moreover, the dialogue format of the protagonists' questions and answers gives people the feeling that the protagonist urgently needs to show his face and steal the spotlight. The first few chapters gave me the feeling that a young child who thrived under the red flag traveled to the world of martial arts and dreamed of unifying the world. Also, my understanding of the exercises and mirror system is different from the author's. In my impression, all Qing Gong requires internal strength. Except for some Qing Gong such as Lingbo Weibu, even Wei Xiaobao's various magical movements also require internal strength. When the protagonist has no internal strength, he hopes to use Qing Gong to escape. Qing Gong that does not use internal strength can only be regarded as a light body technique. It can increase movement speed, reaction speed, etc., But it cannot be like walking on snow without leaving a trace, floating on water, or flying on grass like Qing Gong. It is a good idea to fight in the mirror space to gain practical experience, but it seems a bit unreasonable for you to learn moves through the mirror space. In addition to basic moves, martial arts moves should also need to be supplemented by specific movement routes, right? (Personally, I think the reason why martial arts moves have become a sect The reason why Pai's unique skills can be learned is just by looking at the moves. Wouldn't it be embarrassing if others saw them after using them once in public?) Therefore, it feels like the protagonist can learn the martial arts moves of other sects by fighting mirror images. I feel that there is no other explanation except that the protagonist is a genius. For example, Tai Chi swordsmanship requires a corresponding route of movement in order to be practiced in practice, unless special skills such as Nine Yang Divine Skill and Xiao Wuxiang Skill are learned. There are also Fengshen Kicks, Paiyun Palm, Tianshuang Fist, etc. In the wind and clouds, which are all matching moves of the exercises. In addition to perfecting the moves, the skills also need to be perfected in order to learn the three-point return to the vitality. I feel that it would be better to learn moves in the mirror instead of improving my actual combat experience and familiarity with the moves through mirror battles to achieve the effect of breaking moves. The above are some personal opinions.

Pig's trotters are better than vegetables, but I'm still so cowardly even if I have a system.

A system that is so complicated is a headache to watch. 😙

Can modern people travel through the past to understand tendons and acupuncture points?

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You write all the place names in ancient times according to the current ones, which always feels inconsistent.