The Virtuous Grandson of Ning Mansion in the Red Mansion

The protagonist belongs to the Jia family. No matter you are taking a literary test or practicing martial arts. Born of a noble lineage. It is impossible to blend into the crowd of literati. . Since ancient times, literati have looked down upon each other. You thought you passed the exam. Will it be reused? Impossible. Remember your surname is Jia. . This is the natural lineup. . You can only be Wu Xun. You are a martial artist. . You will definitely get through this level in Beijing. . Forget it, I just entered the palace examination. Don't think about the first three. . It's possible to get more than 100 people, unless the emperor specifically orders you. Otherwise, don't even think about it. . Even the emperor can't see the paper

I've only read ten chapters and I can't stand it anymore. I won't talk about the rest, but I'll talk about the first few chapters. 1. The person who was admitted to the Juren Examination as a teenager was still Jieyuan. Even if you get the Golden Finger, this is not how you play. It is completely inconsistent with the logic of a normal person. It is embarrassing to watch. 2. Someone pried your parents' coffins into pieces, and then you finally forgave them and helped them. This was considered a great act of unfilial piety at that time. 3. To bring a woman who has not yet left the court to be mixed with a bunch of men without covering her face, and to show her face directly, is simply damaging the woman's innocence, and looking like a talented and beautiful woman... 4. Go visit your uncle, take an unrelated woman with you, and then start chatting directly without introducing who this woman is to anyone else. It can be said to be very rude. 5. Lin Daiyu actually had the ability to stick out her tongue. Not to mention some of the virtues that women in that era had to abide by, there are very few women today who stick out their tongue, especially when there are outsiders, teachers, and fathers present. She is simply challenging the bottom line of feudal etiquette. The author's writing is okay, but the plot is really embarrassing. At least I personally can't stand it anymore, so I can only say sorry.

A novel that whitewashes Jia Baoyu and touches the name of a Red Mansion person, one star

When readers read a fanfic, they need to have a sense of immersion and the feeling of the protagonist. The sense of immersion comes from the writing and setting. The author handled it well, but after reading 70 chapters, I really can't stand it anymore, because you haven't changed anything. I haven't seen the protagonist do anything other than taking the imperial examination. When Xue Pan kills people, the writing of Xue Pan is very hateful. The protagonist obviously wants to interfere, but what? Unexpectedly, things didn't change after moving into Jia's house. Daiyu's father, Lin Ruhai, was in poor health and couldn't change even if he wanted to. What you wrote was very confusing, and the readers felt uncomfortable watching it. The overall plot was bland, and the uneven parts were very confusing and uncomfortable for the viewers. I felt like I was feeding poison to the readers again. I should be considered a divine farmer, but I couldn't bear it.

It is obvious that he is already in his forties. Every time he encounters a problem, he always needs to be calmed down. He has to make a grudge with someone and then ease it.

What do you mean, it just looks boring, you know? What you wrote seems understandable, but it's boring and a bit like vernacular. I feel like if I write it simply, it should look good.

Except for Daiyu, they are all original girls, although there are not many

It's been a few days. Hurry up and use your hands and feet to step on the sewing machine for me.

It's very dull to watch, and I can say that the characters are actually quite real. Although it's a little less exciting, it's pretty close to the image and personality of the characters it should be.

The update is so slow that the production team doesn't dare to take a break🌚🌝