I'm a Demon and I'm a New Person

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I really hate this kind of heroine. It's so pretentious and disgusting. Author, how pretentious are you to create such a heroine? The heroine is the biggest flaw in the whole book. Now I feel annoyed when I see scenes with the heroine😙

From the surprise at the beginning to the confusion at the end, I thought it was an excellent novel, but it seems that the author has forgotten his original intention after all. It is hard to believe that the first 200 chapters and the last 200 chapters were written by the same person. Forcibly intensifying conflicts, the protagonist's IQ is forcibly reduced, and the villain is also mentally retarded. The originally warm and everyday style was forcibly transformed into a bloody and brainless style. I've given up. As for the die-hard fans, there's no need to rush to criticize me. You know for yourself whether Liu Xia's writing is bad or not.

I still like the invincible novel. I thought the Demon King was invincible in the human world. . Unexpectedly, a seal came. . . Growth is so slow step by step. . Then I didn't want to see it anymore. Forehead

I couldn't bear to read the content about Song Shijing carefully, but when I saw her awakening, she actually seemed to be the male protagonist's wife thousands of years ago, and she really wanted to become the number one heroine. This is loveless. The author insists that she is kind, simple, and persistent, but no matter how you look at it, it all looks like an illusion caused by Song Shijing's mental retardation and ignorance. Even if she is really kind, simple, and persistent, these qualities in her make people dislike her and even make her feel disgusted.

A heroine ruins a good book

When the male protagonist and Song Shijing are together, they are not like a couple, but more like a nanny taking care of a baby. Song Shijing is responsible for causing problems and causing trouble, and the male protagonist is responsible for solving and coaxing the children. There is no romance, warmth and touching between lovers. The more I watch, the more I want to kill Song Shijing.

It's hard to find a good book, but it seems that the book has not been read before. I really feel like the more I read, the worse it becomes, especially when I see that the male protagonist is completely obedient to a SB woman like Song Shijing, but he is thousands of miles away from Ren Ying. The male protagonist said that he is only lonely when he is in the demon world. He stays in the palace all day. I just want to say that if you are not lonely, you will be a ghost. What does it have to do with being a human or a demon? The male protagonist is a good brother to Zhu Su, who he has known for 7 or 8 years in the human world, but he has no feelings for the hand beside him that has been around for hundreds of years.

The whole book can still be read briefly. If you are a light novel lover, this platform can be said to be good. But there are also some disadvantages. I saw Chapter 95 on the shelves and stopped reading it. Many people may feel a little uncomfortable after reading it and don't know where it is, right? First of all, the author is not used to the writing methods of some online articles, but the daily life and character descriptions are already very good, but in pretense or in any novel world with extraordinary abilities, most authors will not write daily ****, whether it is daily life or not, so some of the protagonists are explosive, and many nb current affairs routines are here. Generally speaking, everyone will read it well, but the author's writing is not good. There is a small ups and downs in the first two ******s. The first time was about the grinding of the bird-man egg. The author failed to make us feel how nb the protagonist is. You have to describe it, not just take away the gun and just report the number and the speed is faster than the bullet. You can't feel it. The second time in the middle, ****** Huo Ling initially thought that the author was going to add another pet (suspicious heroine), and kept watching. I understand this, but why did you pull out your fat classmate to refresh his existence? Then, in a flashy way, he helped Xiao Song to get rid of him??? You come up with a thing that does not highlight the character's image, nor does it mean that the protagonist's ability to write makes everyone happy. Why is the protagonist's friend Fatty shown here? The third time, oh, I thought the opportunity had come. I was interrupted during the date. No matter how vulgar it was, I would use the same routine, such as everyone being destroyed. , Xiao Song was seriously injured, or his sister or mother was caught and threatened and harmed, and when the male protagonist broke out, the author used two chapters to describe the battle between Xiao Song and classmate Yu, which highlighted the character of Team Leader Yu. Then he used two chapters to evacuate his relatives, and another chapter to talk about it. In the last chapter, the author started to get down to business, took out the seal and said Break it, break it. I can understand that this is not a poisonous point, but if you think they are disrupting your daily life, you should wipe them out quickly. I thought the author was going to come up with some invincible and cool moves, but where did the author describe that the protagonist had more than one fist and it took several minutes to blow up 167 trash fish? I cried, what is this? From the article, we can know where one of the protagonist's younger brothers said, "Playing with the king in the applause." When I saw this, I was not the protagonist, but I was involved. The protagonist didn't know, but I knew. It was very uncomfortable to watch the protagonist being played like a toy. How to organically combine fun with daily life, and steadily reorganize comfort and challenging fun. It is important to find the right method, otherwise you will have this feeling. The author found a protagonist No. 2 (A fat classmate) in the early stage, and forced a wave of truth about the ambiguous partner's departure (because she is a demon slayer after all). You can either take sides. I can already feel the author's hesitation when his sister and classmate Xiao Song are ambiguous until the finale. If the author is not very understandable, when writing about daily life, youth campus, (light novel category) ******, for fighting, you can refer to One Punch Man, or Fairy King, Qi Mu Nanxiong, 100% psychic power, and IQ, you can refer to strength first, if you have nothing in your mind and no plot, if you follow the outline and write a full-time novel, it will not be as interesting and interesting as what other high school students write. .

Why is Xiaoling not with Mu Qian! Even though there was a four-year agreement, you didn't say whether Xiao Ling and Mu Qian were together in the end. It's really sad. I hope there will be a sequel!