The Extraordinary Journey of American Comics

Looking for Stan Lee, that's right, he is the old man who appears in every Marvel movie. He is one of Marvel's cartoonists and the most mysterious and easy-to-find master in the Marvel Cinematic Universe. Whether it's going home or something else, you can't go wrong with Stan Lee! ! ! Good news for salted fish time travellers!

Well, why don't you become a transvestite?

I hope the author can see that the setting is very good and the plot is also good, but there are a few areas that need to be improved. First, the writing ability. Many sentences are incorrect, and many plot jumps are jumpy, so many people were confused when watching it. There is also the issue of person. The third person should be the name of the protagonist throughout the whole article, unless it is a dialogue. You are Luo Yang in the previous sentence, you are the Purifier in the next sentence, and you are the young Purifier in the next sentence. It was clear that two people were fighting, but you suddenly made it look like three or four people were fighting. The second is the relationship between the butterfly effect and the original plot. The butterfly effect in fan fiction should start with the protagonist's time travel. For example, Captain America, you said you were digging a hole, but that's not the case. If the plot before time travel is changed, then the protagonist's story will no longer be the original Marvel plot, and the protagonist's biggest advantage, the plot, will be gone. So what's the point of fandom? Third. The description of the battle is very poor, very poor, with no sense of picture or immersion, and many times the fight is confusing. Fourth, the gold finger settings are imperfect. There are several levels of cards. Skill cards, character cards, etc. All have descriptions. So what about the white cards? The protagonist has drawn so many card packs and what about other things? This is not something that can be explained in one sentence. Just because the level in the game is low doesn't mean it's useless in reality.

What if the protagonist is invincible and unites the world? Will the genes used to give birth to children in the future be yours? It's not the original body's genes~~but he happily helps others raise their children

Why is it not a transformation when the card is drawn? If it is not a transformation, then no matter which mage is drawn, wouldn't it be the same? They all use the skills drawn. So what is the difference between different mages?

The writing is average, but you can read it. But when the author wrote about the protagonist's abilities, I couldn't understand it at all. I felt that the protagonist only knew some small spells, but he couldn't do any big moves like this, and he was very awesome at that. I don't want to watch it anymore

It's extremely messy. The plot is messy, the language is messy, the abilities are messy, the characters are messy, there is no beginning or end, I don't know what to say.

I can't understand it at all, it's so confusing. I'm talking about game skills and Weiman.

The author would like to recommend a mobile game to you! Marvel: Future Fight, Marvel background, there are many superheroes and villains in it! X-Men, Women's Federation, aliens!

Marvel is a scary world. Sometimes, while sleeping, the universe is destroyed by the Tribunal of Life or Thanos fights with the five creator gods of the universe. Then it was invaded by the Beyonders.