Dragon Ball Super Grandmaster

Don't forget, human potential is endless!

Author, what kind of bullshit are you writing? You actually think that Krillin relies on blood and throughout the entire Dragon Ball, only Yamcha and Krillin are pure earthlings! Use your brain before writing! Don't deal with readers!

Um, first of all, I would like to apologize to the author. I saw the original version after charging, and then went to watch the pirated version. Before the charging, the content and the general plot were very exciting. After reading it, I personally felt that there were many bad points that I wanted to complain about. I hope the author can see that in the book, I found it a bit difficult to accept the various behaviors of the protagonist pretending to be pigs and eating tigers. It was too much, and at least one of every three chapters was about eating tigers. It's not that it's not good, but I just felt that the description was very It feels stiff and forceful, and it doesn't look smooth. This feeling is mainly reflected in the description of the protagonist's combat power. It seems that no one knows how strong the protagonist is. Every time the protagonist wants to say what he wants to say, there must be some factor that interrupts him. And then he has to wait until the end of the fight to find out, oh, he is so strong. Every time I see this, it feels super stiff. Occasionally, once or twice is fine, but every battle is like this. I feel that the author is really paddling, and then in the main character. In terms of the character's emotions, what I want to say is that he looks a bit messy, especially the three-eyed clone. Specifically, in the chapter about Gao Yanan in the story book, I feel that this person is seeking death. He has a bad temper and provokes hatred towards people. I don't understand why the protagonist still behaves like this. It doesn't make sense. In other books, all the people who are enemies die early, and those who are teammates are usually troublemakers. It can be said that it is to show the strength of the protagonist. I personally think it is unnecessary. It's another very tough way of pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger, especially in the chapters about Wu Taidou in the past. It's too obvious. So far, the three-eyed master of this time and space is the first to play this story. The protagonist gives me a feeling that he is very arrogant and emotionally confused. The protagonist is unreal and has no characteristics. The above are the places that impressed me deeply. There are some bad points that I won't talk about. It's irrelevant. To be honest, if my future chapters are still like this, I really don't have the strength to support my return to the original version.

It's getting more and more poisonous. A clone of a three-eyed clan who has taken possession of his body has an extra parent for no apparent reason. The real body suddenly becomes a weakling, loses his body and loses his memory, and shares the same body with the two souls of Klin in the parallel world. Does the author think that the clone's combat power is too high? Clear everything and start over again?

Many settings of Dragon Ball have been changed, and the character's personality has also collapsed. Kame Sennin is set to be a snobbery. In the beginning, Kame Sennin knew that Sun Wukong was a Saiyan? Moreover, Krillin is set to be the strongest Earthling, and Yamcha is also an Earthling. Turtle Immortal just accepted them as his disciples. Also, what is the setting that people on earth can also be seriously injured to increase their combat power? Moreover, Sun Wuhan has nothing to do with the Sun Wu family. Sun Wukong and Yamcha said when they first fought against each other. Sun Wuhan is the weirdo who jumped out of the stone. He was shocked. How could he have relatives?

This book reflects the psychology of the author. He likes to have threesomes, which is disgusting. He has an affair after seeing a shared body, and now his clones are still sharing women. He pries the women of his brothers and friends. He is poisonous and poisonous... He has a wrong outlook on things. He is a eunuch.

I cuckolded my brother and I wanted to throw my phone.

It is said that the human body has infinite potential like the stars and the sea. It has surpassed Sun Wukong's fighting power, but why does it matter so much about blood? Isn't this a slap in the face? As far as the clone technique is concerned, if you divide your soul into two parts, are you not afraid of cutting off your own potential? It's good to be complete.

Writing about this Krillin time and space is simply a waste, it would be better to write about the original time and space. Sun Wu originally had the ability to travel through time and space, but that was the way for him to become stronger, not for him to stay here and attract bees and butterflies as Klin.

The protagonist talks a lot of nonsense