The Demon of Journey to the West
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Thirty thousand years after becoming a god and six hundred years before the journey to the west. The story of a guy who traveled through time and became a demon clan, rose up in Hezhou, Xiniu, and became a peerless demon!
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Official(175)Scraped 1mo ago
The author deserves to be the author,
The protagonist is Na Sha Crazy first, then Tai Yi, and Li Longji. Your chickens give birth to dogs, dogs lay eggs, and eggs hatch pigs, right? Rice grows on pine trees.
Farewell!
The story idea is very creative But the protagonist's character is very low, and his extremeness comes from the impact of reality? The protagonist of the novel I was writing was fine at first. Later, I suspected that the author had imposed his own emotions on him. He was conflicted and inexplicable. I have been with the demon god for N years and the demon god helps me with n sentences. What is the formula to activate the system? When the villain dies, is it handled so blandly? Bad people die because they talk too much. Does the law no longer apply? The writing style is too vague and jumpy? Every time I read the next chapter, I feel like I have to think of what happened. I really can't bear to describe this in detail. Replace one word with another? Am I here to fill in the blanks? The description of the fight is a uniform and bleak scene. It was better in the early stage, but it became more and more perfunctory later on! Can't you change the connecting vocabulary of many chapters? Can it be more vivid? It's okay if the logic is stronger. After reading dozens of chapters, I just couldn't stand it anymore. I said goodbye!
Speechless!
Originally, the word count seemed quite large, and it should be good to be able to write so many words. However, nine out of ten reviews I saw were negative reviews, which made me afraid to read them, for fear of wasting time, ugh...
This book is so mediocre
It's amazing. You can practice by yourself in minutes at the beginning. You also need to throw something like magic weapon iron into the alchemy furnace, which looks like it is used for refining weapons. You are amazing. You need to arrange an identity. It only takes a few sentences. There are so many ink marks and there are only a few. What's the point of using it?
too tired
It's so long-winded. It looks so tired and a bit messy.
It's so damn verbose, I'm just trying to make up the word count.
What a crappy book. Even if the writing is poor, it's still talking nonsense. You can write a chapter with just one sentence.
It's so fucking verbose. What are you writing about? Junk food, poisonous!
I have never seen such a rubbish novel, it has tarnished the word "Journey to the West"
Journey to the West has changed beyond recognition in this novel
It was this simple text that made me fall in love with Da Da's work. It is a rare good book. It would be a pity not to read it. This book is really great, and I hope to publish better works. Come on
QQ Reading's recommendations are too bad.
Speechless I'll recommend it if you pay me, and have some bottom line, okay?
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Official(175)Scraped 1mo ago
The author deserves to be the author,
The protagonist is Na Sha Crazy first, then Tai Yi, and Li Longji. Your chickens give birth to dogs, dogs lay eggs, and eggs hatch pigs, right? Rice grows on pine trees.
Farewell!
The story idea is very creative But the protagonist's character is very low, and his extremeness comes from the impact of reality? The protagonist of the novel I was writing was fine at first. Later, I suspected that the author had imposed his own emotions on him. He was conflicted and inexplicable. I have been with the demon god for N years and the demon god helps me with n sentences. What is the formula to activate the system? When the villain dies, is it handled so blandly? Bad people die because they talk too much. Does the law no longer apply? The writing style is too vague and jumpy? Every time I read the next chapter, I feel like I have to think of what happened. I really can't bear to describe this in detail. Replace one word with another? Am I here to fill in the blanks? The description of the fight is a uniform and bleak scene. It was better in the early stage, but it became more and more perfunctory later on! Can't you change the connecting vocabulary of many chapters? Can it be more vivid? It's okay if the logic is stronger. After reading dozens of chapters, I just couldn't stand it anymore. I said goodbye!
Speechless!
Originally, the word count seemed quite large, and it should be good to be able to write so many words. However, nine out of ten reviews I saw were negative reviews, which made me afraid to read them, for fear of wasting time, ugh...
This book is so mediocre
It's amazing. You can practice by yourself in minutes at the beginning. You also need to throw something like magic weapon iron into the alchemy furnace, which looks like it is used for refining weapons. You are amazing. You need to arrange an identity. It only takes a few sentences. There are so many ink marks and there are only a few. What's the point of using it?
too tired
It's so long-winded. It looks so tired and a bit messy.
It's so damn verbose, I'm just trying to make up the word count.
What a crappy book. Even if the writing is poor, it's still talking nonsense. You can write a chapter with just one sentence.
It's so fucking verbose. What are you writing about? Junk food, poisonous!
I have never seen such a rubbish novel, it has tarnished the word "Journey to the West"
Journey to the West has changed beyond recognition in this novel
It was this simple text that made me fall in love with Da Da's work. It is a rare good book. It would be a pity not to read it. This book is really great, and I hope to publish better works. Come on
QQ Reading's recommendations are too bad.
Speechless I'll recommend it if you pay me, and have some bottom line, okay?
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Rebirth Flame Journey to the West
The fire demon born from Bagua snatches the body of the Golden Crow to become the Golden Crow. The setting is different, and it actually requires corresponding heaven and earth karma in order to improve the realm. The update is super slow. It seems that there is no intention to become a eunuch at the moment.
Recommend
Both in Journey to the West and outside of Journey to the West, it is a rare masterpiece among immortals nowadays.
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