Super Martial Arts Era

This book is generally good, but some of the bugs are too childish. This world is a world that places equal emphasis on technology and martial arts, and it's still in the interstellar era. A back injury actually takes a month to heal? Is medical care so bad? Impossible! It's too obvious

The stronger you are, the more smoothly you can promote the evolution of Gaowu. The protagonist himself is only in the initial stage of innateness, but he is already studying the realm of transcending innateness. It is too fake. Don't you think the realm in the game is very empty? It's not something you experience personally, it's just given by the game, and the theory is also very empty. If the protagonist is already one of the strongest human beings, and then studies the next state with a group of people, everything will be more reasonable, and there will be no trouble of being threatened, and the danger of being killed. I don't think the protagonist is in danger now. His reliance is based on theoretical feasibility. What will happen if it fails? Have you considered trying to get skin from a tiger? And even if it succeeds, so what, the cunning rabbit will die and the lackey will be cooked. The protagonist knows so much, which is the biggest flaw, and he can completely control it by force to extract knowledge. Your own strength is your greatest support

When I came home yesterday, he had finished all the housework. At that time, I thought it was just a whim, but today I saw that he had already bathed the baby and washed and hung the clothes. When he saw me coming back, he ran over and asked me what I wanted to eat tonight. After dinner, do you want to go watch a movie together? . . In the past, because I had some black spots and acne on my face, he would not take me out to play at all. Fortunately, my best friend was considerate and introduced me to a Weixin public account (Qing. Ru. Xu). I learned a lot, and now he can't bear to go to work every day.

The Dragon-Elephant Prajna Kung Fu is an external skill, so you shouldn't be unfamiliar with Jin Yong's system. It should focus on tempering the body. Even if there is internal strength, it should be done by practicing the external strength to the extreme to generate internal strength from the outside in. Maybe I don't understand the author's training system enough. I still have a question, why do you not learn so many advanced mental techniques at the beginning? It is understandable that the martial arts is low-level. After all, it is your fault that you are not strong enough to hold a jade. Even if you practice the Quanzhen Sect's Twenty-four Judgment of Golden Guan and Jade Lock, after all, Taoist Kung Fu is awesome, isn't it? It is said that the book contains the Secret of Immortality, the Picture Book of the God of War... These, I think the author should write them😜 The above are purely personal feelings

Brother, are you using your martial arts to perform like an actor?

The subject matter is not bad, but the writing is useless

I read a lot without realizing it. It's very easy, come on author!

Author, is Chaowu more powerful than martial arts and reaching the level of a saint?

It's such a pity that a very good book has been ruined. After reading the beginning, I was actually very surprised, but the jump to the map later was too sudden. I wanted to give up several times but still jumped to finish reading. It wasn't until I read the postscript that I realized that the author had some understanding. Another suggestion is that online articles are quick articles. It is best not to write about how an expert plays chess in a foggy way. Do not forcefully improve your skills. This will look tiring. If you encounter untimely map changes, the chances of abandoning the book are too high. What a pity for the good idea of ​​this book.

Pretentious writing, full of magical skills and attending a rubbish school