Ship Girl under the Starry Sky

At first, I liked this book very much because the author said that every character should be brought to life, and every character is a living character. However, the further you get towards the end, the more it looks like a horse-breed novel, the kind where beauties from all over the world come running after a sudden shock, just like Shimakaze. The protagonist was clearly not developed and got angry in the principal's office because of her before, but after he became developed, he didn't spontaneously go to Shimakaze to help her. He waited until Shimakaze himself appeared before continuing to write about Shimakaze. The book is very good. As an Aotian novel, the book is very good as a Ma Zhong novel. I don't like this kind of book, because this kind of novel almost makes enemies in all directions. Basically, except for those who help the protagonist, they are written as scum. I gave it four stars because it's not my type. The above are all my personal opinions. If anyone thinks it is wrong, please understand.

It feels like except for the protagonist, 99% of the people are idiots with zero IQ. The whole school is full of brainless second-generation ancestors. . . Then let's forget it's a bit dark, as the dark background of Our Lady's Heart plus decisive killing of enemies doesn't feel right. . . The boss, the admiral, is seriously fighting among himself, and there is no sense of tension against the enemy Deep Sea. . .

It's really disgusting. Since the academy rejects the protagonist so much, the protagonist is still licking his face. It's simply poisonous. Yes, this is the early stage, but is it necessary to make it look like it has no dignity? Since this is a world, it means that this place is not just a place for training admirals. Is it necessary to stay here shamelessly?

Why do I feel like I can't connect to many chapters?

The author's writing is okay, a standard light novel. But the story I wrote seems to have no outline at all, it is very messy, there is no main line, the characteristics of the characters are not obvious, everyone feels the same, and I don't know what the protagonist is going to do after reading 10% of it. The protagonist feels that he has not done anything meaningful, just like a homeless person. The author should first determine the main line of the story, and then develop the plot. The character description is also messy, too casual, and it feels like he is just practicing his writing.

I admire that the chapters you bought and read can disappear directly. The author probably never writes outlines and notes when writing, and overturns the previous settings later. There are many places where the warship girls summoned by digging holes can directly forget dozens or hundreds of chapters. From the beginning, he creates a power that crushes everything and transcends the world, making the plot difficult to write. He can only force them to disappear or selectively forget. This level of writing is unparalleled. Not recommended

The protagonist is so holy

Poison, poison, poison, poison, poison, poison, poison, poison, poison, poison, poison, poison, poison, poison, poison, poison, poison, poison, poison, poison, poison, poison, poison, poison, poison, poison, poison, poison, poison, poison, poison, poison, poison, poison, poison

What should I say? This book is so messy that it probably doesn't have an outline. It's okay for newcomers, but not for old bookworms. .

Yan Xi, I'm impressed by your update speed, and I'm also impressed by your update-chasing mentality.