Dance with the Moon Sword Love Record

This book could have been longer. Why did it end like this? At least the seven major sects should appear one by one, and the five aristocratic families of gold, wood, water, fire, and earth should also have some stories to make it perfect. It is a pity that the story only has five scenes and is gone. The author's writing is good, but the storyline is too simple.

The plot is not very coherent, a lot of foreshadowing is not used, and a lot of settings are lost, but it makes people feel that they are just to make up the word count! The emotions of the characters are not in place, they are basically flowing emotional lines, and the ethical concepts of various characters are very problematic. The younger generation's emotions towards their elders are also all kinds of inexplicable! Overall, there is a good main line, but the various branches are messy and the meaning is unclear. The ending is so bad that it makes no sense. The author is female? To be honest, it seems like you can't grasp a man's emotions, but this is based on the protagonist's emotions. As a woman writing about the male protagonist, whether it is towards women, friends, parents or other elders, her feelings are all kinds of shit! And I don't know if there is something wrong with the author's own ethics. The women in it are either 'acting as they please' or 'foolishly chaste until death'. There are all kinds of extremes, and the characters' personalities are simply embarrassing!

After reading some more, I wonder if the author is a girl, the male protagonist is too...

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