Reborn in the Mythical World

How should I put it? First of all, the author's writing style is average. It can be seen that the author wants to write in an ancient style as much as possible. However, the writing style is not enough. The painting of a tiger is not the opposite of a dog. The writing is half white and it is very awkward to read. For example, around the 50th chapter, the protagonist copied a poem to show off. After copying The following group of people started to flatter me, saying, "We have to make the protagonist fall into a dead end." I just wanted to ask what a dead end is. And it's not just this place. The whole story is more ancient style that the author wants to write, but the writing power is not up to the mark, and the writing is awkward. Secondly, the plot setting of this book is really nonsense. All the plots are set up to make the protagonist better show off, and rationality is completely ignored. He also talked about copying poems. The poems are of course good poems and can stand out in any scene. However, here comes the question. There are five poems with very different styles, and the protagonist just casually said them without even breaking it? Poems usually use objects as metaphors. The objects described in these five poems are similar, but the emotions contained in them are different, and even polar opposites. As the saying goes, the protagonist can switch between five different emotions in just a few minutes? This is mental illness. Moreover, the protagonist is only the head of the case, far from being able to be questioned. An eternal poem of love and scenery is a matter of course, and no one questions it. But there are five consecutive poems, each with a different style, and there are even some poems that have nothing to do with the poetry society. Generally, those with some knowledge will definitely question plagiarism immediately. Besides, one of the ancient poems is enough to overwhelm the audience. The protagonist copied one of Li Bai's poems, and yet someone came out and said that one poem was not enough? Author, have you seriously studied Poetry Club or read similar novels? The competition in the poetry competition is about quality, not quantity. One good poem is enough. Normally, no one would come out and talk about why one poem is not enough and another one. It is enough for you, the author, to forcefully pretend to be awesome for the protagonist.

I just want to ask, are you really reading this book? It totally feels like it's in the third person, like it's a narrative article rather than a novel, so I didn't read it clearly. It feels awkward, and the plot feels a bit shortened, and I quickly jump to the next scene. This is how I feel.

I have been cultivating Taoism for more than thirty years and have gone through countless hardships to form the golden elixir. Why are you so cruel, taking my golden elixir and destroying my Dantian? The little nurse on the side said disdainfully, isn't it just a gallstone? To be fair, there was a young girl in the obstetrics and gynecology department on the second floor. She was so talented that she became a Nascent Soul at the age of sixteen. She still had her removed by us, and that was nothing! There are a few people in the out-of-body stage in our hospital morgue, a few people in the Nirvana state in the crematorium, and the few people in the emergency room who were struck by lightning are still in the state of transcending tribulation! Those schizophrenics in the mental hospital next door are still in the distracted state!

It feels so embarrassing to have an out-of-body experience every time I fight. Do I need to bring a coffin and tell the enemy that I will put my body in place later and we can start after my out-of-body experience?

Beating and killing you from beginning to end is not a spiritual practice, but is it a demon? What others seek is freedom, but what you seek is killing. Besides, if someone has something to do, they should figure it out first. Cause and effect. The world described by the author can be imagined on impulse. Everyone feels that they are the most annoying person in the world. He doesn't care whether he's good or bad, but I can't understand him anyway. He didn't explain everything clearly. If you think about it carefully, it can be misleading.

Originally I had written more than a thousand chapters and thought it was a good book. However, when I went in to read it, I was almost persuaded to quit the whole process. The background of the story was vague and I had to rely on my imagination. The most important thing is that from time to time there were some plot points that I couldn't understand. I'm not bragging. Anyone who can patiently read the first hundred chapters of this book is a great person. After reading dozens of chapters, I really couldn't stand it anymore.

I saw some book friends at the back telling me how to divide the lower realms.

It wasn't the prosperous dynasty that was promised, but how come the protagonist is Lu Qingqing, the second generation ancestor, and his father is a female ghost. Before that, he had a goddess as his background, and then he became the leader of the case and someone harmed him? Chapter 45 Are so many people really trying to harm him? What kind of physique does the protagonist have, a physique that forces things to happen? What happened? You live in ancient Gotham, right?

There are missing chapters and few words, making it troublesome to read.

Comments have given rise to talents since ancient times, and quatrains from the ages are easy to come by. If he was not born on the wrong day, how could Li Taibai of the Tang Dynasty come to be? If there were netizens in the Tang Dynasty, there would be more than 300 Tang poems. Fortunately, Li Bai died early, otherwise it would be difficult to maintain his reputation as a poet! ! !