Pastry Master

I feel that the author is very mature and his approach is different from others. From the experience of a seven-year old bookworm, this is a good book. Well, at least it's not poisonous, and its values ​​are correct. The slow pace is more to my liking. I have been a prostitute for 6 years, and this book made me commit my first time . It can only be said that it is rare.

Author Ann, I hope you can answer this. I feel that this system is not as useful as the old master, so what is the use of this system? It is better not to use it.

If nothing else, here are a few photos, I hope you like them

The rating is so high that I am actually a novice. The character description is very stiff and I can't write emotional lines. The technical flow is not bad, but I just use my weaknesses and avoid my strengths. I wrote a bunch of female supporting characters before the main character is even established. It's all kinds of awkward.

I don't think there is a problem with the protagonist's mentality, it's with the author's mentality. It's really hypocritical. Just live on a soft diet, or just open a shop and make money. Life is so tiring with the system.

The content is too bland, and it doesn't matter whether the system exists or not. What you are writing is an online novel, not a published book. The content is a bit fresh at the beginning, but after a dozen chapters it will feel too boring. I even feel that reading Xiaobai Shuang's novel is better than reading this book.

I can't bear to see the wasted dough steamed into steamed buns. How can the dough for making noodles be directly made into steamed buns? How can dead noodles be steamed into big steamed buns

In fact, it seems mundane from the front. It mainly writes about the protagonist crossing industries and entering the professional field every day. However, many places do not reflect the cognition of a normal modern human being. Chapter 320 is so poisonous before and after, it makes no sense. I understand that the plot requires the protagonist to suffer a blow, but the emotional rendering is simply anti-human. What kind of dog-gnawed literature is the plot design? These chapters made me doubt life. Is this something that humans can think of? The work behind the protagonist's group is briefly mentioned, and the protagonist's own crisis response is 0. The funniest thing is that the matter of pretending to be a surveillance camera is very abstract. After being framed, a special paragraph was written, "The protagonist decided not to pretend to be a surveillance camera only after careful consideration." He did not pretend to be a surveillance camera after thinking it was useless. Is this a modern human being? The background of the main character is a college student, okay? I don't think it's useful and don't pretend. It's simply anti-human, anti-common sense and anti-cognition. There is another overall poisonous point in the whole text. The protagonist's understanding of society is not like that of someone who changed careers after receiving higher education and several years of work experience. He is like a migrant worker from the valley who just came to the city to set up a late-night snack stall and was appreciated by the boss. The character creation is very abstract and inconsistent with common sense.

I read this book for 3 hours in one breath. I have finished it now. I feel that it is not enough. The novel is plain and true, and the academic content is also relatively real. It is really good. As a seven or eight-year-old book king, although I am not as superficial as the three- or four-year-old novelist who just wrote the novel, I am not as awesome as the old book god who has been reading for nearly eleven or twelve years. I feel that the review is still pertinent. The book is good and relatively small. Come on, the author, it is impossible to become a god, but the reputation should not be too bad.

I originally thought about fattening up, but I couldn't control myself and came back within three days. Why did it take so long for Gaodian to play? Then I would have to wait a few more days to see the results.