Pastry Master

I feel that the author is very mature and his approach is different from others. From the experience of a seven-year old bookworm, this is a good book. Well, at least it's not poisonous, and its values ​​are correct. The slow pace is more to my liking. I have been a prostitute for 🐴 for 6 years, and this book made me commit my first time😑. It can only be said that it is rare.

Author Ann, I hope you can answer this. I feel that this system is not as useful as the old master, so what is the use of this system? It is better not to use it.

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The rating is so high that I am actually a novice. The character description is very stiff and I can't write emotional lines. The technical flow is not bad, but I just use my weaknesses and avoid my strengths. I wrote a bunch of female supporting characters before the main character is even established. It's all kinds of awkward.

I don't think there is a problem with the protagonist's mentality, it's with the author's mentality. It's really hypocritical. Just live on a soft diet, or just open a shop and make money. Life is so tiring with the system.

The content is too bland, and it doesn't matter whether the system exists or not. What you are writing is an online novel, not a published book. The content is a bit fresh at the beginning, but after a dozen chapters it will feel too boring. I even feel that reading Xiaobai Shuang's novel is better than reading this book.

In fact, it seems mundane from the front. It mainly writes about the protagonist crossing industries and entering the professional field every day. However, many places do not reflect the cognition of a normal modern human being. Chapter 320 is so poisonous before and after, it makes no sense. I understand that the plot requires the protagonist to suffer a blow, but the emotional rendering is simply anti-human. What kind of dog-gnawed literature is the plot design? These chapters made me doubt life. Is this something that humans can think of? The work behind the protagonist's group is briefly mentioned, and the protagonist's own crisis response is 0. The funniest thing is that the matter of pretending to be a surveillance camera is very abstract. After being framed, a special paragraph was written, "The protagonist decided not to pretend to be a surveillance camera only after careful consideration." He did not pretend to be a surveillance camera after thinking it was useless. Is this a modern human being? The background of the main character is a college student, okay? I don't think it's useful and don't pretend. It's simply anti-human, anti-common sense and anti-cognition. There is another overall poisonous point in the whole text. The protagonist's understanding of society is not like that of someone who changed careers after receiving higher education and several years of work experience. He is like a migrant worker from the valley who just came to the city to set up a late-night snack stall and was appreciated by the boss. The character creation is very abstract and inconsistent with common sense.

I read this book for 3 hours in one breath. I have finished it now. I feel that it is not enough. The novel is plain and true, and the academic content is also relatively real. It is really good. As a seven or eight-year-old book king, although I am not as superficial as the three- or four-year-old novelist who just wrote the novel, I am not as awesome as the old book god who has been reading for nearly eleven or twelve years. I feel that the review is still pertinent. The book is good and relatively small. Come on, the author, it is impossible to become a god, but the reputation should not be too bad.

I originally thought about fattening up, but I couldn't control myself and came back within three days. Why did it take so long for Gaodian to play? Then I would have to wait a few more days to see the results.

How can I put it this way? It's good that this book focuses on noodles and doesn't have messy emotional lines. It's also reasonable to learn skills from a master and put down the original stall. But it's a bit wrong to be an apprentice in the Shangwei Building. Originally, the apprentice was arranged by the teacher to practice, but as a chef The room is divided into several groups, and the male protagonist is not in any of them. He can only work in a time-consuming manner and has no way to get started. This is a bit unreasonable. The big boss arranged for people to come in. The head of the kitchen is the male protagonist's teacher and apprentice. So the male protagonist is allowed to come in and wait without taking care of anything? A group of apprentices had trouble at home, so the male protagonist took over. When the apprentice came back, there was another duel, and he won, but the male protagonist still quit. In the end, he was alone, and his salary was paid separately. So why go around in such a big circle? To be honest, it would be better for the male protagonist to open a steamed bun stall by himself. He can practice, earn some money, and be comfortable. Why do he engage in so many kitchen intrigues that affect his mood? Let's talk about the system. To be honest, the sense of existence is too low, and the author has not grasped the function settings of the system at all. Otherwise, there would be no plot of apprenticeship, because the male protagonist of this system is actually completely self-taught, and it is impossible to exist. I have practiced it many times and I can't figure out what is wrong. Author, you also wrote the system to point out what the male protagonist did wrong. , But many times in the article, only comments are given but no mistakes are made, but the teacher of the male protagonist can point out the mistakes, which is equivalent to the author neglecting the functions of the system, which leads to the stagnation of the male protagonist's ability. This can also be seen from the practice of kneading dough in the Appreciation Building. It can be seen that the male protagonist has gained the skill of kneading dough with the help of the system without a teacher. In other words, to a certain extent, the system can also play the role of a teacher, and it is a teacher who can give you advice at any time. The author did not delve into this point at all. This book is essentially a story about the male protagonist who focuses on the continuous learning and progress of pastry and finally becomes a pastry master. In that case, he should focus more on the study of technology and continue to make progress. To improve oneself, the system can actually be of great help in this regard, especially if the male protagonist's teacher has laid the foundation for the male protagonist. Then the next part depends on the male protagonist's own efforts, and it is impossible not to use the system. This is actually a small climax of this article, but the author forcibly inserted a very frustrating kitchen fight. Was it a slap in the face in the end? Hit. Feeling good? Very frustrating. I just want to give the author a word, is the ease in your label eaten by you? There are indeed no messy love lines, but there are messy intrigues in the kitchen and workplace, as well as all kinds of messy unfair competition in the catering industry, and frugality with no source of income. Would you say you are not working as an apprentice in Shangweilou? But the male protagonist first thought that he was working for free, and then after a big scene, he was told to pay him alone, but how much? I don't know, when will it be released? I don't know, I gave up before I even saw the paycheck. After reading this, the most enjoyable part of this book is the part where the male protagonist sells roasted gluten. Originally, the gluten was sold well. Although the technology has improved slowly, it is because I have to set up a stall and spend less time practicing. I thought that although I might go astray, the system is watching. I originally thought about saving up money to open a store, but the store is getting better and better. Money With a guarantee, I spent more time on my craft, and since I became an apprentice, the male protagonist's teacher gave the male protagonist a few books, asked him to read them, practice again, and then pointed out what was wrong with the male protagonist. This felt like it overlapped with the system functions, but the apprentice male protagonist gave up the source of money, and then the plot of the Appreciation Building Apprentice felt very bad.