Immortality: Begin Your Experience on the Monster Hunting Ship

It's fine if you fight, but if you want to have a harem, don't be so disgusting. Even if you want a harem, you shouldn't be related by blood. You are the first heroine, the second heroine is the ancestor of the first heroine, and you co-wrote the whole family package, right? The first heroine also has an 8-year-old cousin. I suggest you accept her as well. It will be a great reunion dinner for the whole family. Three views really exploded. Nausea

Why am I so familiar with your subject matter? Wait a minute, let me think about it..., Ah, I remembered it, this system is the one from Ship of the Curse. Brothers, that book is very good and I highly recommend it.

If you don't even know how to write cool things, why should you write online articles? You can either kill and decisively build your power, or you can become a lone ranger with mechanisms. You have chosen the most disgusting option, getting married. Can you control it? Do you think you are a cuckold or worried? I want to see the largest number of people and the simplest one. You didn't write either of the two paths. The previous poisonous points are still bearable. At this point, half of the readers have run away. Are you Ji Cha or Guan Guan Gongzi? How many authors can't write about the harem. Either there is a tool heroine or there is no heroine. Are you better than getting out or forgetting to say anything?

It's either a studio or it's the Five Poisons. It has all kinds of poisons and tricks. It doesn't follow logic. The plot twists and turns are extremely abrupt.

The subject matter is okay and in line with my taste, but the Luo girl succeeded in getting me off the drug. The protagonist said one thing and did another. It was purely a loser's behavior. She refused at first, but then started to have sex. She agreed not to have contact with her, but later she started to want to get married. I can only say that you are awesome if you can resist drugs.

I always feel that the plot after the protagonist becomes the captain is a bit too far. Although the protagonist is still repeatedly emphasizing that he is still developing, there is always a feeling that he is too far away!

This ship's trip to sea is worth five to six thousand, but the captain on the ship is only in the middle stage of Qi refining, and his cultivation level in the middle stage is simply unreasonable. Generally, it is this big, so at least it has the main stage in the later stage of Qi refining, and with half the value of the Foundation Establishment Pill, the Foundation Establishment can be started.

Author, I added a new realm. I endured it, but it turned out that I had to condense nine magical powers to break through the golden elixir. I had to go from more than 100 water to more than 400 to break through the golden elixir. Author, you are really invincible. It's ridiculous. I really feel that you added a new realm. It's a real failure. What I hate most in my life is the Virgin Bitch pressure level. Although you only have one, I still give you a two-star praise. You don't need to thank me.

If you write about this ship repair and this immortal cultivation system, it will be a direct waste. It's not good for you to choose the innate one. Return the ship to repair and repair it👻.

First, the subject matter is quite good and the writing is quite good. The second arrangement is quite vicious. At the beginning, it was said that we should develop slowly and have a system. However, after more than 40 chapters, it was gone. How much cultivation did it have? You can arrange it for the heroine, but you have to force it. Isn't it good to have a plain encounter? The whole clan came out to tsk, poison! I was always wary of women in the front, but I stopped pretending in the back. As my cultivation level increased, I started to drift off, and then I became papa. I even retreated without even building a foundation.