Douluo: Holy War Angel, Son of the Holy Spirit!
by Eye-catching White Forehead Wu Song
About This Novel
[Two protagonists + one person traveling through time + one person reborn + invincible flow] Yun Zhao traveled across the Douluo Continent and became the child of Qingtian Douluo Yunming and Holy Spirit Douluo Yali. Originally, it was almost impossible for Yali to get pregnant. Who would have expected that Yun Zhao, who had traveled through time and space, would meet her with almost no chance of getting pregnant. Because of this, Yun Zhao and his sister Yun Che became the favorites of the entire Poseidon Pavilion. After showing talent that surpassed that of his parents, Yun Zhao was even groomed as the heir to the master of the Poseidon Pavilion! Yun Ming: "This child is like me!" Yali: "My child, you are a lucky person who was born with a lot of luck. My mother hopes that you can grow up happily." Guan Yue: "Hey, hey, call me uncle and I'll listen~" Zang Xin: "Why doesn't this kid want to enter the Tang Sect?" It's just... Yun Zhao discovered that he also has a twin sister. This guy doesn't seem to be a fuel-efficient lamp...
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Official(29)Scraped 3d ago
Yun Che, I don't want to use this name carelessly.
The single female protagonist kills 99% of Douluo fans. Specifically looking for single female protagonists. The protagonist is very strong, but the battles are well written and exciting, unlike those that end hastily in a few sentences. The male protagonist-Xu Xiaoyan I like this very much Sister-Unknown (Personally, I don't really want it to be Tang Wulin and his sister. I think Tang Wulin and Gu Yuena are just fine. I hope it's another boy, or something original. I don't want to find a random boy and give it to my sister. I think it could be, for example, the protagonist's rivals and friends who grow up through competition. I hope they can get in touch with each other gradually. The sister's emotional scenes don't need to be much, but at least they shouldn't be too abrupt. It seems like just picking someone to deal with.) Overall I thought it was well written. But currently, Chapter 20 is level 46. It feels like the progress is a bit fast. Maybe try to avoid it. For example, I have talked about the original plot, the emotional drama of the protagonist or sister, or some other original plots, and the improvement of sub-careers to prevent the protagonist from progressing too quickly. All in all, if possible, my sister should write better and not look like a tool in the later stage. Be independent. I think this way, both male and female audiences should be catered for. It's just that the author has to work harder. There are currently no poison points. Very well written.
Xiaochang, I personally think it's a bit weird for an angel spirit to carry a knife. A sword or gun would be more suitable.
The author will update soon, this is not enough
If you have any suggestions or ideas, you can leave them here
Online articles are stories that authors and readers advance together. You give me suggestions and support, and I bring you the best story I can write. I hope you can collect it and read it more, and if you have any ideas, you can discuss them.
It's the best Douluo fanfic I've read, but I still hope that Yun Che and Yunzhao don't have CPs. I'm not reading this book just for Wu NaoShuang and YY. I think this book can be improved by focusing on the bond and story line between the brother and sister. After all, after reading so many CPs, many of the emotional lines can't be handled well. I hope the author can work hard!
How to resolve the conflict between Shrek and the Federation? Should he restrain Shrek, or directly overthrow the Federation and become emperor himself? How to resolve the problem of plowing the ground with level 12 custom-installed soul guide cannon eggs in such a tight time?
Please, it must be orthopedics. Orthopedics will be perfect or there will be no female protagonist.
What is the role of this sister? How does it help the protagonist?
The author should update it soon, I really want to read it
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Official(29)Scraped 3d ago
Yun Che, I don't want to use this name carelessly.
The single female protagonist kills 99% of Douluo fans. Specifically looking for single female protagonists. The protagonist is very strong, but the battles are well written and exciting, unlike those that end hastily in a few sentences. The male protagonist-Xu Xiaoyan I like this very much Sister-Unknown (Personally, I don't really want it to be Tang Wulin and his sister. I think Tang Wulin and Gu Yuena are just fine. I hope it's another boy, or something original. I don't want to find a random boy and give it to my sister. I think it could be, for example, the protagonist's rivals and friends who grow up through competition. I hope they can get in touch with each other gradually. The sister's emotional scenes don't need to be much, but at least they shouldn't be too abrupt. It seems like just picking someone to deal with.) Overall I thought it was well written. But currently, Chapter 20 is level 46. It feels like the progress is a bit fast. Maybe try to avoid it. For example, I have talked about the original plot, the emotional drama of the protagonist or sister, or some other original plots, and the improvement of sub-careers to prevent the protagonist from progressing too quickly. All in all, if possible, my sister should write better and not look like a tool in the later stage. Be independent. I think this way, both male and female audiences should be catered for. It's just that the author has to work harder. There are currently no poison points. Very well written.
Xiaochang, I personally think it's a bit weird for an angel spirit to carry a knife. A sword or gun would be more suitable.
The author will update soon, this is not enough
If you have any suggestions or ideas, you can leave them here
Online articles are stories that authors and readers advance together. You give me suggestions and support, and I bring you the best story I can write. I hope you can collect it and read it more, and if you have any ideas, you can discuss them.
It's the best Douluo fanfic I've read, but I still hope that Yun Che and Yunzhao don't have CPs. I'm not reading this book just for Wu NaoShuang and YY. I think this book can be improved by focusing on the bond and story line between the brother and sister. After all, after reading so many CPs, many of the emotional lines can't be handled well. I hope the author can work hard!
How to resolve the conflict between Shrek and the Federation? Should he restrain Shrek, or directly overthrow the Federation and become emperor himself? How to resolve the problem of plowing the ground with level 12 custom-installed soul guide cannon eggs in such a tight time?
Please, it must be orthopedics. Orthopedics will be perfect or there will be no female protagonist.
What is the role of this sister? How does it help the protagonist?
The author should update it soon, I really want to read it
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