Daming: after Self-destruction and Time Travel, Lao Zhu's Mentality Collapsed

I am also an author. I have been writing in the studio for two years, and I have written about fantasy and modern cities. I have read about 100 chapters so far. Let me briefly talk about the pros and cons. I have to say that this subject matter made my eyes light up. The opening is eye-catching and makes me eager to know the following content. But after entering V, I started to frown, especially after the 80th chapter. The plot is too delayed. The author needs to know what the point of the book is. As readers, after seeing the gunpowder and other things the male protagonist does when he leaves the palace, it is too delayed. , I don't want to read it. The focus of the plot should be around the dialogue between the hero and the emperor and the vision and thoughts of the hero as a modern person. But starting from the 80th chapter, I started to not understand it. I hope the author can think about it a little. I wrote fantasy books before, and I forgot the protagonist's character appeal and the highlights of the book in several books. As a result, the remaining chapters are not as good as one. If I continue writing like this, there is a high probability that it will be cut. I don't know whether the author signed a buyout or something else, but the subsequent plot is really...

It's too shabby. I say one sentence at the beginning and then continue to talk about it. I cover up one thing without mentioning the key points and just write it in a few paragraphs. There are also many inconsistencies. At the beginning, I said I didn't understand it, but then a historical data popped up. At the beginning, I said I was afraid of death, but then I tried my best to die. The article does have some new ideas, but the author is not good enough and it's sloppy, so I don't care if I don't read it. The main reason is that I am annoyed by the water. My mother-in-law is very verbose and boring to watch.

It says almost the same thing inside.

Shouldn't you just stop thinking about it now? How could Chu Ze be known by the Tatars? There are only a few people who know that Chu Ze is the future. With Lao Zhu's ability, how could the Tatars know that these things were made by Chu Ze? Moreover, Chu Ze is a secret of the Ming Dynasty. It is impossible for Lao Zhu to let the Tatars know that Chu Ze knows how to make these weapons. Weapons have always been the first secret of a country. Do you think Lao Zhu will let the Tatars know? I have been looking forward to it for a month. I can write a wave of this kind of thing slowly and think about it. It's getting boring to do it like this. I originally wanted to fight against Japan, but now I want to open a harem, right? There's no need to read it anymore, so I started writing randomly. I was originally looking forward to this novel. I didn't have the habit of reading novels before. This is also my favorite work. As a result, I really started to be disappointed. I had been looking forward to it for a month, but I kept saving it and didn't read it. I'm really disappointed.

It's interesting, it's interesting, but it's so awesome. It's so damn slow even though you've paid for the main text. It took you seven or eight chapters to write about one thing. You drank tea and chatted in the pavilion for seven or eight chapters. You're such an awesome water king. It's okay once or twice, but let's just leave it for now and read it later if you're interested.

Brother, what are you doing? There has been no update for three days.

The only advantage of this book is that the update speed is okay, but most of it is watery... When I first read it, the subject matter was novel and funny. I don't know what I was writing after that, and I have forgotten what I wrote. The oil thing was repeated twice. The protagonist of the telescope had done it before, but it was done again by someone else. The author wrote whatever he thought of, without any outline, and so many people reported these problems and could not see it.

Gunpowder weapons were brought to Europe during the Mongolian Western Expeditions, and matchlocks became popular in the Ming Dynasty after they were captured from Japanese pirates during the Jiajing period. Xu Guangqi also recorded this. Why did gunpowder weapons travel to Europe in the Ming Dynasty?

It's really rubbish. I spent 8 yuan to buy the whole book, and then I charged for it later? If you can't afford it, don't play it

Give you a little humble opinion 1. In ancient times, no one would immediately understand you when you mentioned a time traveler, and they would kill you immediately upon hearing this. 2. The emperor is not something you can just see if you want to. 3. There is a possibility that even if you meet the emperor, if you mention it, you will definitely be put under house arrest and asked to manifest things for future generations one by one. As long as you can manifest one thing, you will never see the light of day. It's impossible for you to appear in the public eye A little humble opinion, you can read it or not. If you agree, please reply. If you don't agree, just take it as a joke.