I Picked up Attributes in the Red Building

Traveling through the Red Mansions, the only way out for the young master of the Jia family is to join the army. Military merit is the fastest and it is easy to avoid the Jia family's house raids. It's a bit funny that if you don't move when you join the imperial examination, you will be charged with crime. Not to mention the "obscuring one's name", it was only for the children of poor families in the world. He studied martial arts and joined the army at the age of 16, which was exactly the middle point of the decline of the Jia family. With military merit and ability to lead the army, Jia Yuanchun would not have died in the harem. Everything was possible. Of course, the second wife could also take part in the imperial examination. The Rongguo government still copied it because Jia's mother, Mrs. Jia Zhengwang, gave all the charges to Jia She and Wang Xifeng, and so did the house confiscator. Dafang, from the back, continues the content of the family imperial edict in Chapters 80-120 of Dream of Red Mansions - the article clearly states that officials are bought and sold, and private tutors and foreign officials are involved in lawsuits (Wang Xifeng is Mrs. Wang's white gloves, and Mrs. Wang is Jia Mu's white gloves) - Mrs. Jia Zheng did it, because Jia She's seal is in the hands of Jia Zheng and his wife, and they are the housekeepers. It is difficult for civil servants to get ahead if they have connections, and they will be framed by civil servants if they force themselves to do so. Forget about the so-called old relationship, and the imperial family has no friendship anymore. Jia Zheng and his wife have almost destroyed all the connections in the Jia family's army. As for Ping'an Prefecture, there must be hidden secrets. It is probably Jia She's last connection in the army, which was directly killed by the emperor. The most ruthless thing is that the emperor's family - the founding lineage and the country's fellow cultivators, will not be given to future generations. They seize the opportunity to enter the officialdom, condone nobles to buy and sell officials, make loan sharks, and use this method to confiscate their homes when it is useless. In fact, civil servants with power also do the same thing. Little do they know that the most loyal people except eunuchs are the founding nobles. Because they are the same practitioners as the country, they can continue to be officials when the civil servants change dynasties. The founding nobles will raid their homes and exterminate their clans when they change dynasties. Those who do not destroy their clans will become paupers immediately!

A poison, the timeline is messed up, I can't stand it. The second poison, thinking about coke in ancient times, skipped it. Three Poisons, Qin Keqing faked his death, bro, how on earth did you come up with this idea, you ghost brain?

This chapter is extremely poor. When writing for a government examination, in order to elicit Nalan Xingde's poems, the test question is actually the official examination requirement of writing poems about boudoir. Do you want to lose your brain? No need for basic logic? Originally, writing for imperial examinations is the best way to show the author's writing skills. If you don't have that ability, you can just blur it out. If you have the ability, you can use the four sentences of Shanghengqu to pretend to be big like Fuyao Heshan. After seeing this, I simply couldn't numb myself and continued reading.

What's outrageous is the internal strength, Zixia's magical power has come out😐

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The writing was pretty good, except for the beginning of Chapter 5, where the character selection for Lin Daiyu was a bit too vicious, and I almost gave up reading it. The rest of the writing was just okay, no big problems.

From the first eighty chapters of A Dream of Red Mansions, you can tell that Cao Xueqin is just like Zhen Jia Baoyu in the autobiography! He could only write about things in the back house, but he couldn't hear what was going on outside the window. He took the case of Xue Pan beating someone to death, and they were known as the Four Great Families! And he's still an imperial merchant! This lawsuit is that even a steward of the Xue family could see that Xue Pan was fine, and he died three days after returning home. Even if he died on the spot, as an upper-class person in ancient times, he would not be sentenced. The most serious case is to find a servant to sentence him, and then he can just spend money to save the next servant. The problem is... Hey, Cao Xueqin does live in his own world, and writing about the four great families is actually just bragging. He really doesn't understand anything about powerful people!

It's really good, a rare high-quality Red Mansion article.

Nao Chan, if there is such a system, you still write the Four Books and Five Classics

The plot design is okay, but the writing is average. First, the common problem in novels is that there are too many repetitive words and general scene descriptions. But the parts are written in detail. For example, the scene of winning six yuan should be a grand scene written in detail, but it turns out that a small thing is very simple. The content of the original work can be roughly compared with the plot, but it is written in too much detail. Thirdly, some places are inconsistent. It was just explained that the number of female champions is unreasonable, and then the female crown prince appeared. If you later accumulate strength to rebel, and then kill all the Rongguo Mansion, fourthly, the counterattack of Mrs. Wang Jia Baoyu and Jia Mu is too late. Although the previous part is not aggrieved, it is too bland, especially Jia Mu, who also writes that she feels okay about Jia Huan. The only highlight is that Jia Baoyu is the toughest one when she pours gold juice, and other times it looks uncomfortable. , When you have the strength, you should become domineering, otherwise the first prize will not be in vain. Fifth, the description of resourcefulness gives people a feeling of wanting to lay out the layout but not knowing it clearly, and the feeling of being witty but not witty enough. For example, the descriptions of strategies and questions are too superficial, and the answers are too plain, and the literary language is not enough. Overall, it is below average.