
Eternal Life in History, Creating a Three-thousand-year Family!
by Motoji-kun
About This Novel
A terminally ill history buff, with a piece of magical jade, transformed into the ancestors of past generations, and continued his life by continuing the clan. At the same time, he practiced morality, established virtues and performed meritorious services, wrote a strong chapter in history, and made up for some huge regrets. And with his struggle, the family became more and more prosperous, from the city to the county, from the county to the county, from the county to the state, until he ended the Tartars in advance and saved the entire China. When future generations read history, they all sigh with emotion: Three thousand years of Chinese history, hundreds of generations of character, half of them belong to the Sanyi clan!
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The protagonist turns a blind eye to the famous queen mother in history after taking her as a concubine. She only pays attention to the court and does not care how powerful this woman is. I feel that the author has done this once when writing Bao Si. He has learned a lesson and still despises these women. These women may not be able to accomplish anything even if they have outstanding abilities because of the times, but don't they have the ability to do bad things?
My personal suggestion is that for family portraits, group portraits should be taken. Cultivate more and add less
I feel that before the unification of Qin, it was a bit boring, just repetitive. Since history is not changed, you can write more stories about famous people in history to use as seasoning. It is really boring to just repeat. You can describe some women, such as women of the San family or detailed stories of historical celebrities. It may not be a good choice to keep advancing the timeline. For example, the San family can have natural talents, right? A family has been in a family for hundreds of years, hundreds of thousands of people, the San family has passed down books for hundreds of years, and none of the adult attributes have exceeded 70 or 80. What has been passed down? Where is your hundreds of years of cultural inheritance? Is your protagonist the only person who watches all of Legacy? Can't other tribesmen learn on their own? Even if there is no attribute that can break through 90 by itself, it depends on the protagonist to add points. Is this reasonable? Although it is better to highlight the protagonist, it will be boring after a long time. Since you have already written about the family, you should switch to pseudo-group portraits. Don't rely on the protagonist to add points to everything. It may not be a good thing to highlight the role of the protagonist too much. Occasionally, some special talents should be produced. There are more short stories to harmonize the plot, but being too boring is the big shortcoming of this novel. More little ingenuity and more variety. Finally, although the role of the protagonist must be highlighted, you are from a family after all. The family must look like a family, so it must be a group portrait. I personally think that you can rely less on the protagonist to add points and strengthen the role of your hundreds of years of family inheritance. And your sect elder system, I think it can be upgraded to add a few special talents from other small sects. For example, once a qualified person is born, the system will remind you to focus on training. The focus of family inheritance is to cultivate, not to add points, but purely to add points. How did this or that famous family in history come to be? Personally, I suggest increasing training and reducing points. Maybe I didn't express it clearly, please understand.
Let's change it. Zhang Liang wasn't born yet. The Han Dynasty hadn't been established yet. No one knew about him.
A novel that I have been reading, worth reading
The ending is too fast. I was checking for updates this morning. I just finished reading it today.
Will you just copy it? And I won't change some unreasonable things.
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Comment on Mi Yue
The protagonist turns a blind eye to the famous queen mother in history after taking her as a concubine. She only pays attention to the court and does not care how powerful this woman is. I feel that the author has done this once when writing Bao Si. He has learned a lesson and still despises these women. These women may not be able to accomplish anything even if they have outstanding abilities because of the times, but don't they have the ability to do bad things?
My personal suggestion is that for family portraits, group portraits should be taken. Cultivate more and add less
I feel that before the unification of Qin, it was a bit boring, just repetitive. Since history is not changed, you can write more stories about famous people in history to use as seasoning. It is really boring to just repeat. You can describe some women, such as women of the San family or detailed stories of historical celebrities. It may not be a good choice to keep advancing the timeline. For example, the San family can have natural talents, right? A family has been in a family for hundreds of years, hundreds of thousands of people, the San family has passed down books for hundreds of years, and none of the adult attributes have exceeded 70 or 80. What has been passed down? Where is your hundreds of years of cultural inheritance? Is your protagonist the only person who watches all of Legacy? Can't other tribesmen learn on their own? Even if there is no attribute that can break through 90 by itself, it depends on the protagonist to add points. Is this reasonable? Although it is better to highlight the protagonist, it will be boring after a long time. Since you have already written about the family, you should switch to pseudo-group portraits. Don't rely on the protagonist to add points to everything. It may not be a good thing to highlight the role of the protagonist too much. Occasionally, some special talents should be produced. There are more short stories to harmonize the plot, but being too boring is the big shortcoming of this novel. More little ingenuity and more variety. Finally, although the role of the protagonist must be highlighted, you are from a family after all. The family must look like a family, so it must be a group portrait. I personally think that you can rely less on the protagonist to add points and strengthen the role of your hundreds of years of family inheritance. And your sect elder system, I think it can be upgraded to add a few special talents from other small sects. For example, once a qualified person is born, the system will remind you to focus on training. The focus of family inheritance is to cultivate, not to add points, but purely to add points. How did this or that famous family in history come to be? Personally, I suggest increasing training and reducing points. Maybe I didn't express it clearly, please understand.
Let's change it. Zhang Liang wasn't born yet. The Han Dynasty hadn't been established yet. No one knew about him.
A novel that I have been reading, worth reading
The ending is too fast. I was checking for updates this morning. I just finished reading it today.
Will you just copy it? And I won't change some unreasonable things.









