Battle of the Ice Emperor

Isn't Furukawa the sixth grade? Why did it become fifth grade?

Brother, you all know that you can't write about Wudong and Daju, which have better grades and have poor grades, but not many people have written about them.

Author, I think I am a long-time fan of you, but I feel that your Death Saint, Lian Medicine King, Ice King, has been completely replaced by someone else. Isn't it a good idea to continue your previous routine and write about a star-devouring fairy and a mortal Douluo who travels through time and becomes the protagonist? If you follow the previous writing method, it will definitely be better than now. There is no need for you to write this forcefully now.

You deserve it, your writing is messy

The author's writing is okay, but what the author likes to say is that he is a small overlord in a remote area. He is so awesome that he can conquer the empire and the Imperial Pill King at every turn. The author doesn't look at the strength and forcibly brags about everyone. Sometimes it is very embarrassing. Like this part of Furukawa, he is a sixth-grade person. If you don't know, you think he is a ninth-grade one. Although if I fight with you, I will be suspected of bullying the smaller ones and make the world laugh at me, but Gu, who bears the name of Alchemy King, also has his own pride. " "That's-" "King... No! Can! Disgrace! " The Imperial Pill King, who entered a state of rage, tore off his gentle and elegant veil, finally revealing a trace of his majesty. He stared at the thin figure and spoke word by word.

Author, I have read all the Dou Po trilogy fanfics you wrote. Among them, Dou Po Legend and Wu Dong Return, I think they are very good. However, since you wrote the book Huangtian Emperor, your subsequent books have been too awkward. The reason is that in the Dou Po series, you should not use Chen Dong's descriptive techniques to write short stories like Douluo. It's too inconsistent. I found out that you wrote "Weiwo Desolate Emperor", followed by "The Legend of the Great Lord Emperor", "Holy Death Scythe", "Medicine Emperor" and now "Ice Emperor". You all want to write magnificent scenes and brilliant words like Chen Dong, but it's too embarrassing for you. If you could go back to the writing techniques of Dou Po and Wu Dong, at least your grades wouldn't be so bad.

Why has the relaxed and funny style disappeared since the book Huangtiandi? That was also a turning point, right?

Author, author, you can directly write the fanfic of Zhetian

Although I also like this name, don't keep saying Ice King. It's not good to just say Ice King. Anyway, the first thing is that you want to make up the words after hearing too much. The second is that it's really awkward after hearing too much. I used to read an old Douluo author whose writing is getting worse and worse. One book is not as good as the other. I hope the author will not be like this.

How can I say that I really like the author's book? I couldn't find this book myself without searching. After reading it, it's okay. Anyway, I beat the old author. I feel that the score will definitely be different in the future.