Family Cultivation of Immortality: Starting from the Tortoise

It's nice to look at. There's nothing poisonous about it. I don't like being invincible at the beginning. This kind of slowness is just right. The monsters in it are also very interesting.

The first four chapters made me frown. The core contradiction is that an adult who has been in a tortoise body for two hundred years, although not mature and prudent, should not be so childish. He actually gave the first opportunity to give a golden finger to a rebellious teenager who was full of love in adolescence instead of being a respectful, calm and mature patriarch. It really shouldn't be done. This is so irresponsible to this family and this boy!

After reading more than a dozen chapters, I hope the author can make some changes. This is the system rewards. The reward arrangement is a bit too deliberate. The past two hundred years were peaceful and uneventful, and no monsters or monsters came out. As a result, all kinds of monsters and monsters came out at the beginning of the chapter. The rewards on the system side suddenly became richer, and I am sure that 80% of the protagonist depends on these just-in-time rewards. To solve the dilemma, this arrangement is too deliberate. Of course, this is a problem of writing power and it is not easy to change. Then you can change the two hundred years of thank you for your patronage into a consolation prize of eating Bigu Pill for a day. This can at least dilute some of the deliberateness of the plot arrangement, which is still a gain. Or you can replace it with some magical power fragments, and you can synthesize a magical power by gathering together enough.