Immortal Cultivation, I Have a Small World

The early stage of Qi training - the middle stage of Qi training, the late stage of Qi training, the peak level of Qi training, and the great perfection of Qi training. Only then can you upgrade to the second level of Qi training. I almost died laughing

There are many and exaggerated sentences describing expressions. There is also the scene where the protagonist takes people into the small world and pretends to be a holy land. It was so embarrassing that I almost got cancer.

What's the difference between your qi training and martial arts?

It suits my taste. Anyway, I really like this kind of thing.

Very well written. That's the content. It's a bit mind-boggling. The update is a bit slow, please come on!

After reading dozens of chapters, I felt that it was very average and overpowered. The protagonist relied on the resources of the small world to accelerate, the treasures of heaven and earth, and the useless leapfrog krypton gold skills that were very resource-hungry. As a result, he only dared to say that he was invincible at the same level after he had reached the ninth level of Qi training after eating so many resources. Also, the War Elephant has eaten up so many resources and needs boiled eggs to break through the foundation building😥. I don't know when the mortal stream must be bound to boiled eggs. Is it too deliberate to still boil eggs after eating so many resources?

I'm a little speechless when describing the elephant's promotion to foundation building. If you don't know how to write, don't write. Lowering the overall rating if written so badly will only disgust people. And the biggest problem in your world is how can your aura support the cultivation of so many people? Is your spiritual energy concentrated in those places? Otherwise, the creatures and mineral veins you have released so far will not be the same. And there is an origin that should be able to generate anything you put in, otherwise this world will be useless.

The heart is as high as the sky. The writing is so bad. After a hundred chapters, I have become a bit smart. I have been petting breakthroughs and writing two chapters. Forget it. Look back and see what you have written. If you break through yourself, your writing will be even worse. Ordinary monks will faint if they break through. Why should other people break through? Just wait until they die. You are so good that you can't stand it anymore. Besides, as soon as the elephant breaks through, it goes everywhere to destroy and build foundations. Is this the case? Then there are trees, mountains and rocks in this world? And you are a person who can get ten elephants when you first join the sect. If the sect loses 37 elephants in the Qi refining stage in a battle, it will make people in your lineage cry and the sky will collapse. So what is the point of your elephant? It was easy to get in front of me. I feel that ordinary disciples can get ten heads. But now you have lost 37 heads and you are crying and crying. What do you mean? And I don't understand the relationship between your elephant and the dragon. He can actually absorb the blood of the dragon. This is a cross-species thing, brother. Isn't this the place where you, the dragon nature of your sex, have sex? Ok, even if you can absorb it, did your sects not blend in before or something? Do they not know how to absorb it, or do they not know how to do research in this area? You are the only one who knows that the sect that has been responsible for this for so long is so stupid. Oh, no, the elephant itself knows it, but other people's elephants don't know it, they are all idiots.

I feel that after using AI after it was put on the shelves, it feels very awkward to listen to books.

The book is okay, but there is too much nonsense, and the book is not good enough. One or two sentences of dozens of words must be written in hundreds of words, and Che Lulu talks back and forth.