My Practice Has Deteriorated

It was originally written well, but what the hell was that about the ogre? She eats people from your tribe and you still appreciate her talent. All the grudges have been forgotten. What's the difference between you and the Japanese who kill your family but appreciate him because of his great ambition and ability?

Very interesting. A bookworm of more than ten years. There are few books that I can read like this. As for those. People who give low ratings. Your understanding is so poor. Poverty is on a large scale. The protagonist travels back in time. Today's knowledge may have made life better for your family to some extent in ancient times. And they eat three meals a day. I don't want to talk about it either.

Saint clan? It's not even a living thing, it's just life. It's even a bit like artificial intelligence. It exists for efficiency. The definition of the Yaling race is wrong. You assume that they are happy to release things that are beneficial to their cultivation. Note that they are happy, and slavery is only painful. Logically speaking, this race should only receive preferential treatment, and no race can occupy it alone, because the benefits are big enough, and there will be competition. What's more, it's as exaggerated as what you wrote.

The overall feeling is good, but there are a lot of poisonous spots in it! I remember that in your acceptance speech, you said it would make readers feel at ease, but I don't know what you meant! ! ! Writing a book can be regarded as writing a story! You can write something that is somewhat relevant to you, or you can write something purely from your own imagination! But no matter what, it's a good story to let readers cry, laugh, feel sad, or get angry along with your writing, and let readers take on the role! It's not like I'm asking you to write Buddhist or Taoist scriptures and feel calm after reading them! On the contrary, you, the author, should keep calm and remain calm and rational. You can accept other people's criticism of your writing techniques, but if you have a complete outline of the plot, don't change it at will.

The ogre killed the girl who liked the protagonist and ate her heart. It was too dissuasive.

War between races is very cruel

The hatred of the nation and the hatred of cannibalizing compatriots are actually appreciated. If this person only has the hatred of the nation and not the hatred of cannibalizing compatriots, there is no problem in appreciation, because her hands are not stained with blood, but she is. You can understand a person's three views from what a person writes. Although this may be a bit harsh, it is not unreasonable.

The author's writing is good, but the part about the saint girl is not good. Just like the Anti-Japanese War, the mortal enemy is the mortal enemy. Don't beautify the war.

Generally speaking, I want to have a big picture, but I can't grasp it. The result is embarrassing, but it is better than a brainless and cool article.

If you don't change the part about waiting until you die, people will scold you the same way when they look at this part.