I Snatched Taishang Laojun's Alchemy Furnace

An urban novel is actually written as a Jianghu novel with many sects. I am also drunk, and there is no sense of realism at all. The city must look like a city. I am thinking of writing myths and cultivating immortals. Even if it is about the grievances and grievances of Jianghu, you cannot abandon the real society, let alone peel off the fairness presented by the legal system. Fanxing, apart from Qian, the more than ten chapters you wrote are not reliable. Looking back, I thought you wrote a time-travel novel, seriously out of touch with society, basically passing it by in one stroke, overly describing the world of spiritual practice, and exaggerating the strength and power of sects and gangs. The framework of the novel you wrote is based on New China after the founding of the People's Republic of China.

It is necessary to add some love plot and storyline. Without love, it is like a man missing a woman, a fish lacking water, and the story will be lively.

Come on, I love the visit of the braces girl

Very good, keep up the good work! ! !

Come on, may you become a god soon.

Come on, I wish you to become a god soon.

There is always a kind of power that can accompany you

If you don't give up this second, there will be hope in the next second! If you stick to it you will succeed!

Persistence is majestic, because persistence is tempered by all kinds of beatings; persistence is sweet, because fearless and unfailing perseverance has already sown the seeds of victory in the heart.

Have a good rest and keep up the good work