Five Immortals Gate

It is definitely unreasonable to ask for a quick web article that can be written with thousands or even thousands of words in a day like a masterpiece that is written with hundreds of thousands of words over several years or decades... Those who have such requirements should be persuaded to quit! The typos and misspellings are acceptable enough that I can make up for it with my own brain, but the author has finished writing it himself, wouldn't he take a look at it? The description of many things is really too long-winded... It's not just the word count, it's really long-winded. It makes a simple thing very repetitive and redundant... Nagging. In my personal opinion, if there are dozens or hundreds of chapters, take stock of the harvest inventory, open a few more small maps to play in the wild, one battle should not be too long, but you can gain experience in a few more battles... This kind of "watery" word count is better than long-winded... How can it be possible if hundreds of millions of online articles are not "watery"! I still like the settings and the plot very much, just the way it tells the story... For the books I have read, just by reading them, I will feel grateful and thank the author for accompanying me to kill the boring time. However, if I have some dissatisfaction, I will still raise it...

Ninety out of a hundred sentences are nonsense. Rubbish.

The beginning is like this kind of non-committal, nondescript, arrogant, low-class society, and it goes on for who knows how many chapters.

Like Dou Po, there is also a story about an old man in the book. It starts with the same routine as the story of a mortal cultivating immortality. It is a plot by a master who wants to seize the body (seize the spiritual energy) of his apprentice. The plot is unreasonable. How can a primary school student (private school) from a mountain village come from so many thoughts? He is generally pure, kind and honest. He is written like a scheming hypocrite... The old grandfather who comes out directly spits out all the realms. Aren't you afraid of scaring him to death! I was severely poisoned! Hope you stick to it!

Alas, this may be the case for ordinary families. There will be a lot of helplessness. Although Li Yan is only more than ten years old, the family has been unable to untie the pot. Moreover, after two years of locust plague, he can only serve as a soldier.

It seems plain, but it has a hint of coolness. I like this low-key upgrade.

After reading nearly 250 chapters, the writing style is still as delicate as ever, but I don't really like the main content of this article. The protagonist seems to be mainly dependent on his parents for being born well, and winning the favor of the Five Immortal Sects with his unique spiritual roots, and he also gets many benefits from this relationship. Boring. Others, such as the two female waiters, who kill people and seize treasures, etc. Are not to be seen. A work that lacks spirit and thought will be in vain no matter how good the writing is.

When I read Chapter 72, I instantly felt loveless. To be honest, I felt very bad about this protagonist, especially with this character. At the beginning, the battle of wits and courage with the military advisor was still very exciting, and he showed a reasonable IQ, but his feelings changed after he was brought to the sect. It is not bad to say that he does not know whether to live or die, and in terms of relationships, a garbage with mixed spiritual roots does not think about cultivation. What the hell is he thinking? Senior Sister Zhao's reaction is not real at all! I have a crush on the protagonist out of nowhere!

Excellent products for mortals to cultivate immortality. Poisonous constitution, the five elements dominate water. ⁄(⁄⁄•⁄Ω⁄•⁄⁄)⁄

Overall it's not bad! The system is the same as that of mortals, the content is flesh-and-blood, and the plot is very innovative. There are a few minor contradictions that can be corrected. Everyone encourages the author to continue working hard.