Lord of All Things

Yunshan is shrouded in mist, and the beginning is just like a suspenseful detective story. I thought it was a fairy tale, and the people I met were all women, either with rich backgrounds or extremely curious. , Die. You can tell at a glance that the protagonist will get into messy disputes. It's not my cup of tea. Goodbye.

When writing this kind of article, it is best to set a goal for the protagonist at the beginning. No matter it is a big goal or a small goal! Why do the protagonists of many books directly wear trash? Because this way the protagonist has a small goal - to get rid of the title of trash. Readers all know that the following content must be about the protagonist's efforts to transform from a waste to a genius! But I feel like many authors don't understand this! In other words, they interpreted some of the reasons for the fire in the divine book to mean that the protagonist in the opening chapter is a waste! Only see the phenomenon, not the essence! It can be said that the beginning of this book is unconventional, but the protagonist has no goal, giving people the feeling of a running account! The reader doesn't know what the protagonist will do next, there is no sense of involvement, and there is no interactivity! For example, after reading a few chapters, I still don't know whether the protagonist wants to be an official, practice martial arts, or become an immortal? Second, there is the issue of writing. Don't write in too cologne style! (That's the kind of you're here? I'm here! You don't have to come, I can come too! This style!) This kind of style requires very high literary literacy. Don't end up painting a tiger instead of a dog! Third, there is no need to force the protagonist to pretend to be a. Suffering a loss is a blessing, and it is okay to suffer some insignificant losses!

There is depth, and I feel like the whole world is about to unfold to me.

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The previous writing is very good, but starting from the battle in Chapters 72 and 3, it seems like a different author has changed. It's too watery.

I couldn't hold on to this book until I reached chapter 33. A Wooden Buddha Breathing Technique was written eloquently for seven or eight chapters. The Breathing Technique was divided into ten sections and 900 short sections. When I came back from a trip, I had to mention the protagonist's hiding things in the matryoshka doll. Each time the breathing technique and the matryoshka doll were used, they were described in detail. The chapters describing the breathing method and the matryoshka doll accounted for at least half of the chapter. It was a bit unreliable.

It's superfluous and unnecessary, I don't like it.

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The start was not bad, and finally there was no waste at the beginning, and then I encountered the situation where Goldfinger soared into the sky at the end

When will two hundred chapters be updated a month