Reincarnation of Tokyo Swordsman from One Piece

Thank you dear readers. I have not banned any comments or deleted posts. Everything is going as it should. I will continue to go to work. See you soon. Thank you.

Although my writing is not very good (-o-), I still ask for your recommendation here. It would be better if you have a monthly pass (✪▽✪)

I didn't expect that pirates would also start this old routine.

I laughed when I was hacked to death by Hawkeye at the beginning. I'd better hold on for a while. Anyone who can duel with Hawkeye will die so quickly.

It's generally okay, but the storyline is too vague. The timeline jumps too fast, making this line confusing, and the character description is not obvious, and the protagonist did not make me feel bright at first sight. Finally: This book is too miserable

Is the protagonist so awesome? I started to think about it, didn't it mean I only learned the basics? At first I thought, isn't the protagonist just a child? I'm wondering how your ordinary people use sword energy? You didn't say anything about inheriting the power of the pirate world. And your hodgepodge of things put together makes me feel so messed up.

It's pretty average, the subject matter is very good, and the author has the ability to write. Since it's a rebirth, fan fiction, you must experience the joy that you experienced when you were a child. It should be written in a cute and funny style, and you can add a little ambiguity in the middle. The pace of your writing is too fast, the operation is like an assembly line, and the direct invincibility of your strength makes it seem like you are not energetic, and there is no sense of excitement and novelty.

The combat is very weak. It mainly relies on high-level moves to support the scene. There is no passion and no sense of heat.

I once thought about writing a fanfic that suited my taste, but I was severely beaten by reality. I hope the author can stick to it and don't want to be a eunuch, even if it ends badly.

I wish you all a happy New Year ( •̥́ ˍ •̀ू )