Douluo's Martial Spirit is Green Light

How about Ju Douluo taking Acacia Broken Heart Red to fight against Tang Hao? How about Bibi Dong reversely pushing the protagonist? How about Yu Xiaogang becoming a father with tears in his eyes? How about Dai Mubai being crippled until death. How about Wang Feng holding Lou A Yin, kicking Tang San, and punching Tang Hao.

Being tricked by Yu Xiaogang... And if Tang San also got the fairy grass, he would probably be poisoned and die on the spot. I don't understand why the protagonist would reveal it to Shrek.

There should be a certain connection between the Wuhun Palace, the unification of the continent and the unification of the First Emperor! The nobles monopolize the way for civilians to become soul masters. If Wuhun Palace was a country from the beginning, and it continued to help civilians make soul masters, they would be awakened.

Poison Point 1: Keep leveling down in the early stage. Regardless of Tang San's background, the protagonist is just an orphan with no background and a low level. Poison Point 2: Since you have already made plans to become an enemy of Tang San, you will not destroy all opportunities for Tang San. You keep talking about plotting the fairy grass, but Dugu Yan even accepts it and resists the pressure. You have to wait until Tang San appears and feels a sense of urgency before giving it to him, right? 3: Tang San has used hidden weapons in the fighting spirit, what's wrong with using poison? Is it interesting to show mercy? 4: The protagonist only relies on some self-created soul skills to make a fortune. There are no other plug-ins. Later, the principles of the self-created soul skills are exposed. What does this mean? Look at Tang San. Only when people develop into a sect are they willing to release something. The protagonist dares to say anything when he has something, just to show off? ? 5: Hidden weapons are a trivial matter. Anyone who has read the original work will know the role of hidden weapons on the battlefield. It would be fine if the author did not arrange something in this regard for the protagonist. Even Tang San has been disdainful of using them. Why did Ning Fengzhi in the original work spend money to arm the sect? You don't even have this knowledge, why don't you think you're a dick? 6: As a time traveler, being able to develop like this is considered satisfactory. Either I really want to have a harem or I want to have a harem. I want the beautiful ones when I see them. I don't look at my own strength and have no background. I just keep licking and I'm almost kneeling.

Since I like women so much, and I don't have any brains to expose my trump cards everywhere, I suggest the author take this one too. Compared to an older sister who is only over 80 years old.

The protagonist is indecisive and has serious double standards. The protagonist calls someone a scumbag and becomes a scumbag himself. The author's plot is completely written by himself.

The writing is immature and the sentences and dialogues are not fluent, like a child's composition, and it becomes even more poisonous after giving birth to a child. The process of recruiting Bibi Dongliu Erlong Tang Yuehua is also very intellectual. Tang Yun'er is also very capable and very capable. Xiao Wu also didn't say anything in the early stage, but her strength has already been hugged by Tang San. She also said that she likes Tang San. Yu Feng gave a few hints and then disappeared. Later, Bai Chenxiang came to the door on his own and Bo Saixi really showed no IQ. The protagonist is both assertive and assertive, wants to accept and return ink for a while, has no interest in anything, and is not courageous in doing things. And Hu Liena, why does she and Qian Renxue have nothing to do with each other? Where does that face come from? Bibi Dong also told his apprentice that his daughter should suffer this injustice. And according to the timeline, why did Hu Liena have an affair with Qian Renxue? This book has nothing but a novel subject matter. The protagonist doesn't have much of an opinion. The green light itself also shows how cool it is.

Let's put it this way, the writing is enjoyable, but it gives people a very unpleasant feeling, the kind that makes you feel uncomfortable after reading it. There is also a problem with the settings. The word "green" has no other meaning in Douluo Continent. When you wrote this paragraph, the setting of your book has essentially gone down a level. Then Xiao Wu let it go in the early stage, giving people a feeling that he wanted to accept it but didn't accept it. In the end, he was flirting with Tang San, and the protagonist had a child too early, probably in his teens. I usually read books very seriously, so I don't understand why the author doesn't often write about the age of the protagonist, but only how long it has been. Did the author himself forget it? To sum up, I feel like vomiting now. It's really disgusting. It seems that this score of 6 or so is deserved. I came here to read the article that is refreshing, but I ended up making myself a lot of trouble.,,,

I feel like the protagonist was written by the author based on his own reality.

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