Super Powerful Mobile Phone System

First, typos are intolerable. Deduct one star. Second, the description of the heroine is not delicate. Not a stud, not dedicated. Third, the later stages of teammate training are not described. After training Xiao Fengyun in the early stage, he basically never trained his own teammates. He always fought alone. It feels fake. Fourth, the equipment description is not detailed. I especially feel that after practicing the fingering technique with pig's feet, I will become invincible and no longer need any weapons. Fifth, the elixir for pig's feet is unknown, but it's just that kind of medicine. Advanced ones should produce advanced elixirs. Sixth, the need for money in the later period is unclear. Don't you love money as much as your life? There is no charge for cheating later. Apart from the above points, I am basically satisfied with everything else. Those who are short on books and want to read exciting articles can join this trap.

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After the poison test, I only read 50 chapters, and the golden finger is too high. Download the Xianxia game to kill monsters to upgrade your experience, download the card game to get hero cards, and download Cool Run to accumulate acceleration. These are all permanent, not temporary! If you are poisoned, download anti-virus software; if you are injured, download beautiful pictures and remove the wounds! Just download a game plug-in and change the level directly to 999. The protagonist's golden finger will be bigger than ten other books combined!

This book is a bit too toxic. I can't stand it any longer. I'll say goodbye.

I especially like to read those books about systems, but they are all equally bad in writing, but this one is the best, and it's really neither bragging nor disgraceful. I feel like I'm willing to spend more than 100 yuan.

I think the creativity is very good, but the protagonist's IQ was directly erased by the author? The disguise function of Photoshop software is so incredible, but you use it to open a beauty salon to give others plastic surgery. Are you afraid that others will not know that you can disguise yourself? Anyone with a little bit of intelligence can know that Qin Chao may have been transformed by the protagonist.

Author, can you update it soon? It is best to update about 5 chapters at a time, so that readers will not rush you.

The beginning of the book is very attractive, the system upgrade ideas are novel, and I was very happy to challenge the strong. But the problem lies in the mid-term layout stage. Many small details and foreshadowings were buried by the author, and only a few were actually dug out. It always felt like it was not finished. For example, in my opinion, the task of winning Xu Wanrong's heart was already completed when Xiao Chao rescued Xu Bo's team from the Western Region. There are also very obvious sentences in the article. I was too lazy to read it. It probably means that Xu Wanrong's eyes and expression when he looked at Xiao Chao were completely different, more gentle. But this task may have been forgotten by the author and not proposed. The overall layout is pretty good, and the mobile phone system becomes more traditional with the whole story at the end, so it's not awkward to read. But I want to say that the protagonist is really lucky. The Tianwu Continent where he was born only has 1 or 2 Martial Gods (excluding the faceless ones such as Beiluo Martial God and Tianwu God). Then there are the Western Regions. There are more Martial Gods, but they are only at the first level. I have no impression of the second level. On the other side of the sacred bridge, there were more than one level and only two levels, and the power was also weak. After leaving the Outland, there were only a few fourth levels of the second and third levels at the beginning, but the story later developed to six and seven levels all over the place, the eighth level filled the streets, and there were more than thirty ninth levels (mentioned in the article). Could it be that the enemies encountered by Xiao Chao, who was so awesome, would never be too powerful? These are the two reasons why I don't give it five stars: the quest line is cluttered and the enemy levels are unrealistic. Overall, this book is interesting. The beginning and the end are very satisfying to me and there is nothing wrong with it. I hope the author has better control over the arrangement of lines and foreshadowing.

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After reading 30 chapters, I really can't read anymore... I won't tell you the reason. You can understand it by yourself. Anyway, the first 30 chapters are free...