Immortality Martial Arts: Start by Focusing on Eating

Why is the pace starting to slow down now? I feel like my writing is qualified to be like this, right? I really feel like I want to run away. Is the outline not long enough? If this mess is part of the plan, it might be better to rewrite it. After entering the city, the main theme is inexplicable. The main plot is not pushed much, and the pen and ink is basically spent on highlighting the masters. We have been able to read the previous part, and it's not that we have survived the development stage and watched the masters show off, but we just feel that it is quite good to develop slowly. After cultivating it, you can show off for a chapter or two. The right way is to go back and upgrade. Why is the level still stuck? There is an audience for this thing, but the rhythm of the writing, let alone whether it will become popular, first consider whether it can survive

Stupid writing, no need for tiger bones, tiger skin, or tiger meat!

Can't you eat the stupid tiger meat and make money from it? A fool

The protagonist is a fool who kills people at every turn. He is so cheap that he doesn't expose his strength and charges you more money to kill people. With his own methods that are not even considered as a three-legged cat, no one can find out if he pursues them. Author, if you have an IQ, you can write more deflated protagonists. Someone who has just entered the ninth level can kill the protagonist at the peak of the ninth level with a mop dipped in shit. If you still concentrate, how difficult is it for an ordinary person to knock down the current protagonist? If you follow a few traps, you will die.

For those of you who are still reading this book, please take a look (not the eunuch's explanation): This 6,000-word book on the Martial Arts of Immortality was signed and passed the first round of recommendation and promotion. For me, it was a great improvement. Later, when it reached 200,000 words, it could not be put on the shelves due to insufficient reading. The editor said that it would take 300,000 words to arrange for it to be put on the shelves. After two hundred thousand words, most of the time I wrote one chapter or two thousand a day, not because of the editor's words, but because of life and work issues. Now, it has more than 300,000 words. If I want to put it on the shelves, I just need to tell the editor. However, I am grateful and guilty to you, the people who read my book. In addition, I can't make much money by putting this book on the shelves, at least much less than my salary. So I decided not to put it on the shelves for the time being and let brothers watch it for free. Although I don't make any money, I will still do my best to make the subsequent stories and plots exciting and enjoyable. Don't worry about being a eunuch. Also, this book is worth at least one million, don't worry.

A good book must find some flaws.

I took the Grindstone Skill twice when I reached the third level.

Chapter 25, "Firstly, this woman is most likely tricked by the Fujia family." The Fujia family was blackmailed by bandits, so they asked this woman to kill the bandit leader. How did you see that this woman was tricked by the Fujia family? There is really no logic at all, and there is no common sense when seeing a woman. Chapter 45 also has many logical illogicalities. Completely clueless.

Is the tiger worthless or something? Kill it and give it to the Fu family to disgust him?

The main character is an idiot and can't even walk when he sees a woman.