Douluo: Break My Legs? Your Mother's Soul Bone is Gone!
by Hemazalin
About This Novel
[No system + Not the Holy Mother + Anti-Tang San + Short-term joining of Wuhun Palace + Decisive killing + Egoism] Traveling through Douluo, he mistakenly entered Tang San's training ground and was beaten into a cripple and was slandered in various ways. Once the martial soul awakens, the sacred tree soul-binding vine + blood dragon eye turns around and joins the martial soul hall to report Tang Hao's location. Bai Luo: I don't hold grudges, I usually retaliate on the spot! As you plunder and develop along the way, you will become a god that no one dares to mess with in the Douluo world! Many years later, he used Ah Yin's soul bone to step on Tang San's head with an arrogant expression: "The most wrong thing you have done in these years is not to kill me at that time, so in order not to repeat the same mistake, I will kill you once and for all!" Step on Tang San, destroy the master, and attack Shrek! If you don't fully join the group, you can scold me if you don't like it and there's no need to leave!
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Official(11)Scraped 12d ago
It's just disgusting. In the opening chapter, the leader of the Holy Soul Village didn't have the right name, so he called Old Tom, and the other person called him Jack. He also had two titles with a 98-level golden blood martial soul, so that Tang Hao, who had a hidden damage of no more than 95, ran away. The golden crocodile was surprised when he saw Tang Hao's 100,000-year-old soul ring. What should he eat? When he doesn't know what happened back then?
Miao wow, step on Tang San and we will be good brothers
It's amazing. He's disabled at level 95, and with a level 10, he can run away in front of a 98 and two level 96s. Moreover, at level 10, he can escape the capture of two level 96s, and he doesn't listen to what he says!
It's interesting, I look forward to seeing the plot of stepping on Tang San.
Not to mention anything else, let's just talk about whether we can always save Zhu Zhuqing halfway. It's not something LSP wants to have every day. If you like familiarity, just play with her sister or mother.
If five Titled Douluo can't kill one Titled Douluo, I'll beat you. If two titled Douluo can't catch a soul master who hasn't obtained a soul ring, you're going to beat your mother! What a thief.
The protagonist is written in such a way that he is worse than a shit guest. He causes trouble for no reason and then kills people without saying anything.
I've just started writing, so keep it up, and I'll give you some suggestions that the author can refer to.
It's also my experience summed up after reading so many books. The first one is that the protagonist must not only have practice but also theory or innovative thinking about his own cultivation. For example, what is a soul ring? Can you say that I develop the energy flow in the soul ring and break through the limitations of myself to create more skills? It makes people think, eh, the author also has some little tricks of his own, and he is not copying others, right? Since the second one is a counterargument, the character and moral character of the protagonist must stand the test. We cannot say that the protagonist is not as good as Tang San in Dou Yi's original work. Isn't this a joke? Don't engage in sexism, treat them equally, regardless of gender, help the protagonist. You should repay well when you should repay, and kill those who deserve to be killed, without procrastination (to be honest, although you are playing with the idea of death, but I think Tang San is still right in this point. Disasters must be eradicated, and if life is worse than death, it is giving opportunities) The last one is, don't have too many female protagonists, and don't want just one, because it's impossible to write millions of words like the original work. Four or five will be enough. The plot should try to pursue a deep emotional bond with the protagonist. This is enough. Too many female characters is something everyone has been criticizing.
That's disgusting. Tang San either doesn't cause trouble or kills you, okay?
It's a purely human-computer novel, with no logic at all, I can't understand the characters, and I don't even know what it's about.
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Official(11)Scraped 12d ago
It's just disgusting. In the opening chapter, the leader of the Holy Soul Village didn't have the right name, so he called Old Tom, and the other person called him Jack. He also had two titles with a 98-level golden blood martial soul, so that Tang Hao, who had a hidden damage of no more than 95, ran away. The golden crocodile was surprised when he saw Tang Hao's 100,000-year-old soul ring. What should he eat? When he doesn't know what happened back then?
Miao wow, step on Tang San and we will be good brothers
It's amazing. He's disabled at level 95, and with a level 10, he can run away in front of a 98 and two level 96s. Moreover, at level 10, he can escape the capture of two level 96s, and he doesn't listen to what he says!
It's interesting, I look forward to seeing the plot of stepping on Tang San.
Not to mention anything else, let's just talk about whether we can always save Zhu Zhuqing halfway. It's not something LSP wants to have every day. If you like familiarity, just play with her sister or mother.
If five Titled Douluo can't kill one Titled Douluo, I'll beat you. If two titled Douluo can't catch a soul master who hasn't obtained a soul ring, you're going to beat your mother! What a thief.
The protagonist is written in such a way that he is worse than a shit guest. He causes trouble for no reason and then kills people without saying anything.
I've just started writing, so keep it up, and I'll give you some suggestions that the author can refer to.
It's also my experience summed up after reading so many books. The first one is that the protagonist must not only have practice but also theory or innovative thinking about his own cultivation. For example, what is a soul ring? Can you say that I develop the energy flow in the soul ring and break through the limitations of myself to create more skills? It makes people think, eh, the author also has some little tricks of his own, and he is not copying others, right? Since the second one is a counterargument, the character and moral character of the protagonist must stand the test. We cannot say that the protagonist is not as good as Tang San in Dou Yi's original work. Isn't this a joke? Don't engage in sexism, treat them equally, regardless of gender, help the protagonist. You should repay well when you should repay, and kill those who deserve to be killed, without procrastination (to be honest, although you are playing with the idea of death, but I think Tang San is still right in this point. Disasters must be eradicated, and if life is worse than death, it is giving opportunities) The last one is, don't have too many female protagonists, and don't want just one, because it's impossible to write millions of words like the original work. Four or five will be enough. The plot should try to pursue a deep emotional bond with the protagonist. This is enough. Too many female characters is something everyone has been criticizing.
That's disgusting. Tang San either doesn't cause trouble or kills you, okay?
It's a purely human-computer novel, with no logic at all, I can't understand the characters, and I don't even know what it's about.
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