One Piece's People Become Stronger with Self-discipline in the Navy
by The Eternal Night Will Dawn
About This Novel
People in the navy become stronger with self-discipline! System assistance, exercise to become a god! Let's see how the protagonist reaches the top step by step through self-discipline! The Yonko, the Shichibukai, the legendary pirates? Lock them all into Impel Down City!
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Official(5)Scraped 7d ago
1 piece of advice for the author
Author, your writing is nice, but I feel that the protagonist seems to have no temper. At least he can react. You have to say that the protagonist is too lazy to talk to them, but at least he has to have some skills with words. If he doesn't even fight back, it feels boring. If you let others laugh at the protagonist, you just want to see the protagonist pretending to be slapped in the face, but there is no effort in words. At least let the protagonist fight back. It feels like the protagonist is like a machine and has no anger.
emm. . . . . I'm speechless, I feel like the main character is SB, not like a normal person
I'm speechless. I feel like the protagonist looks like SB and not like a normal person.
Rating: One star for this book
It has no highlights and is very toxic. The protagonist is a robot who only knows right. I can't even read the first ten chapters of this book. You can imagine the quality of this book.
robot
The protagonist is like a robot, without any emotions, which can be said to be a big poisonous point.
Is the author a retired soldier or military fan? The author should not apply modern military disciplines to fictional novels. If he writes a modern military book that advocates discipline and guarantees five stars, look at what the reviews say, is it not a machine? Military state machine
Rating
Community(0)
Official(5)Scraped 7d ago
1 piece of advice for the author
Author, your writing is nice, but I feel that the protagonist seems to have no temper. At least he can react. You have to say that the protagonist is too lazy to talk to them, but at least he has to have some skills with words. If he doesn't even fight back, it feels boring. If you let others laugh at the protagonist, you just want to see the protagonist pretending to be slapped in the face, but there is no effort in words. At least let the protagonist fight back. It feels like the protagonist is like a machine and has no anger.
emm. . . . . I'm speechless, I feel like the main character is SB, not like a normal person
I'm speechless. I feel like the protagonist looks like SB and not like a normal person.
Rating: One star for this book
It has no highlights and is very toxic. The protagonist is a robot who only knows right. I can't even read the first ten chapters of this book. You can imagine the quality of this book.
robot
The protagonist is like a robot, without any emotions, which can be said to be a big poisonous point.
Is the author a retired soldier or military fan? The author should not apply modern military disciplines to fictional novels. If he writes a modern military book that advocates discipline and guarantees five stars, look at what the reviews say, is it not a machine? Military state machine
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