
Holy Lord: Become Xiaoyu's Boyfriend at the Beginning
by Qingxi Name
About This Novel
This book is also called "The Adventures of Jackie Chan: Becoming Xiaoyu's Boyfriend at the Beginning" "So you said you are Xiaoyu's boyfriend?" Uncle Long looked at the handsome Yi Ting, who was 180 centimeters away, awkwardly standing at the door to introduce himself. Then he looked at his cousin Xiaoyu, who was only 140 centimeters tall and looked innocent in front of him. Uncle Long's kind eyes suddenly became dangerous...
What Readers Think
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Official(76)Scraped 7d ago
I think this fanfic is okay.
Maybe the author has certain deficiencies in his ideas and writing style. But I have to say that when I first saw this novel, I felt like a breath of fresh air. Not to mention the author's slightly inexperienced conception, the courage to write such a novel is very rare in current fan fiction. There is no need to care about what some people say in book reviews. It's better to just watch the original work... Don't worry about it. Nowadays, the two-dimensional novels are all about Douluo, Douluo, Douluo. There are 10 novels about Douluo, seven of them are Douluo... Obviously these writers have sophisticated writing styles but they all write boring works. I personally recommend writing fan fiction about childhood memories like Chinese boys.
wind vane
The author is at the forefront when writing this kind of fan fiction. If there are any shortcomings, please humbly correct them. After all, this is the first time I have seen this kind of fan fiction. Don't delete those who have negative reviews. It will not solve the problem. It will only make them more annoyed and think that you are not enterprising. And what the new book needs is popularity as long as people read it. Some people comment and others give you ratings, which are both good things and can bring you popularity. For example, if someone gives you a rating and adds one popularity point, if you delete it, five popularity points will be deducted. Look more at the book review section and see more ideas and the wishes of most readers. After all, popular works without reference will naturally receive high scores and praise if they are well written. Well, I haven't watched it yet. I've been talking for a long time. After all, I hope you can write better about childhood memories. Anyway, it's better than writing about Bears and Pleasant Goat. That's a cartoon, but this is different. This is animation! Since this is a timeline transmitted from abroad, I can't connect it. I don't know how you feel about it, so stay tuned~
What does the author think
I just want to ask if Xiaoyu is beautiful? Xiaoyu doesn't look good, right? Why should Xiaoyu be the heroine?
The feeling this book gave me.
The protagonist seems immature, like a child who has not grown up. His thoughts and perspectives are all about looking at things from the perspective of a minor. How did an immature mind like his become the second in command of District 13? An immature mind like his would have been eaten away to the bone long ago.
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After about 3 chapters of trying the poison, I might as well read the original work and forget about it. Let's go.
The greater the expectation, the greater the disappointment.
After reading two or three chapters of this book, I had no desire to continue reading. Besides. The character of the protagonist. How to say it? I feel too cowardly. Then the protagonist's position is too embarrassing. I can't stand it at all.
Not interesting at all
If you restore the TV series directly, I can still watch it, but you are actually Zhao Tao, and the TV series is still incomplete.
No matter what your resume looks like now, the content must be about the love life of a warm man and a tsundere woman. The male protagonist is inexplicable and doesn't know what he does to survive.
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Official(76)Scraped 7d ago
I think this fanfic is okay.
Maybe the author has certain deficiencies in his ideas and writing style. But I have to say that when I first saw this novel, I felt like a breath of fresh air. Not to mention the author's slightly inexperienced conception, the courage to write such a novel is very rare in current fan fiction. There is no need to care about what some people say in book reviews. It's better to just watch the original work... Don't worry about it. Nowadays, the two-dimensional novels are all about Douluo, Douluo, Douluo. There are 10 novels about Douluo, seven of them are Douluo... Obviously these writers have sophisticated writing styles but they all write boring works. I personally recommend writing fan fiction about childhood memories like Chinese boys.
wind vane
The author is at the forefront when writing this kind of fan fiction. If there are any shortcomings, please humbly correct them. After all, this is the first time I have seen this kind of fan fiction. Don't delete those who have negative reviews. It will not solve the problem. It will only make them more annoyed and think that you are not enterprising. And what the new book needs is popularity as long as people read it. Some people comment and others give you ratings, which are both good things and can bring you popularity. For example, if someone gives you a rating and adds one popularity point, if you delete it, five popularity points will be deducted. Look more at the book review section and see more ideas and the wishes of most readers. After all, popular works without reference will naturally receive high scores and praise if they are well written. Well, I haven't watched it yet. I've been talking for a long time. After all, I hope you can write better about childhood memories. Anyway, it's better than writing about Bears and Pleasant Goat. That's a cartoon, but this is different. This is animation! Since this is a timeline transmitted from abroad, I can't connect it. I don't know how you feel about it, so stay tuned~
What does the author think
I just want to ask if Xiaoyu is beautiful? Xiaoyu doesn't look good, right? Why should Xiaoyu be the heroine?
The feeling this book gave me.
The protagonist seems immature, like a child who has not grown up. His thoughts and perspectives are all about looking at things from the perspective of a minor. How did an immature mind like his become the second in command of District 13? An immature mind like his would have been eaten away to the bone long ago.
.
After about 3 chapters of trying the poison, I might as well read the original work and forget about it. Let's go.
The greater the expectation, the greater the disappointment.
After reading two or three chapters of this book, I had no desire to continue reading. Besides. The character of the protagonist. How to say it? I feel too cowardly. Then the protagonist's position is too embarrassing. I can't stand it at all.
Not interesting at all
If you restore the TV series directly, I can still watch it, but you are actually Zhao Tao, and the TV series is still incomplete.
No matter what your resume looks like now, the content must be about the love life of a warm man and a tsundere woman. The male protagonist is inexplicable and doesn't know what he does to survive.
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Samsung recommendation ★★★☆☆ Qingshen's book is a fan of Jackie Chan's Adventures. It feels like I'm back when I was a kid. Having said that, the plot is quite interesting. There are some settings that Pudding has forgotten, so I don't know whether they are original or original, so I won't comment on them. (Σ≧︎▽︎≦︎)σ. Then, in this book, Xiaoyu is too cute. The way she pouted her lips automatically brought her into the character. Laugh, when I was little, I thought Xiaoyu was a boy. So cute, must it be a boy? The author's grades are pretty good, and he should be able to finish the book! There aren't many people who write about niche topics like this, come on Qingshen💪!




It's okay. I'm a fan of Jackie Chan's Adventures and Xiaoyu's boyfriend from the future. He traveled back in time to the beginning of the story. I don't know much about the details, but I still have some basics. But now I'm writing in general, let's take a look at the availability
















