Identity V: the Opponent is Cheating? Four Arrests from the Factory Director!

There are too few novels about Fifth... So I would like to sincerely give some advice to the author, hoping that this book will continue to be written: 1. I don't know if the author has read Kong Xin Miao's book Do You Know Double Bomb Flywheel? If you haven't read it, you can check it out (it's also in QQ Reading, it has more than 600 chapters). I think the author's narrative is too lengthy. You can learn from Kong Xin Miao's narrative style. You can finish a game in six to eight chapters, which is both concise and complete. 2. The novels you write must have something that makes people feel happy. When I saw the novel you wrote, it was quite interesting, but it didn't have the feeling of a good article, and there was no detailed summary (this way the traffic is slightly higher and more people would be willing to read it). For example, in the book "Air Meow", the novelist changed his position and defeated Hongdie. , In short, I just want to write more fun and refreshing games (and passers-by can also understand them). If the author likes to write long games, you can refer to the game about the medical curse garden dance in Kong Xin Miao's novel. Although it is also a long game, it is written about the refreshing points, without unnecessary narrative, and the narrative also focuses on the advantages of this combination and the pull with the opponent's supervision, and the ups and downs are also refreshing. 3. Write more about the game. Things outside the game can be covered in one chapter or so. Don't write so much. This is a novel about a competitive game. You will definitely want to read about the things inside the game rather than the things outside the game. For example, I think you can write about things like assassination... But I hope it can be covered in a few sentences rather than written in a large length. 4. There are things like barrages, but I hope not to write them in large lengths. I just want to intersperse one or two sentences in the places where the game is more enjoyable to arouse interest. (I feel that some of the author's barrages are indeed unappetizing, and may even make people feel very annoyed) I'm just a reader, and my suggestions are just suggestions. It's up to you whether you adopt them or not. Come on, author. If you are writing this novel just for entertainment, I won't say much, but if you really want to write this novel well, I suggest that the author can improve his writing style (of course, I don't mean to say that your current writing style is bad, I just think that if the author's writing style can be better, this article can be better)

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There are not many characters in the fifth personality, and those with less poisonous points like this are even more fine chaff.

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