I Created the World

The author is writing this book for free, for love. I won't say anything more from a consumer perspective. I will only make the following comments on the writing and plot. 1 The author is really not suitable for writing about emotions. It would be better for future novels to have no female protagonists, otherwise it will be very poisonous and become a novice novel. 2 The author's plot is too scattered. There is a three-year period in front of it, but there is no sense of urgency at all. It is better to take it and don't make this three-year period. 3. The settings are a bit broken, especially the time flow rate. You should have noticed it from the beginning to the end, and changed it later. 4 The author is also more suitable for writing novels about people behind the scenes and people who come to the screen. You are not suitable for this. That's about it

The player makes trouble and feels uncomfortable. Why let him in? There is no one left? What has become of the world? Time and time again. We agreed not to fall in love, one after another... Anyway, it looks annoying.

Is plagiarism bad? There are a lot of bugs, one day is equal to 10,000 years, it's amazing, these people are all fools, let's not talk about why they can be so calm, let's just say that the live broadcast is accelerated by millions of times, and there is also a Western fantasy world. The first few chapters are fine, but I will ask you where the fun is in reading the latter ones. It is a waste of time and has no meaning at all. Plagiarism can be copied as long as it looks good, but if it doesn't look good, plagiarizing is just a waste of time.

The author said that one day in reality is equivalent to a hundred years in another world. Then why can you hear what they are talking about in the live broadcast room?

I read this book several years ago, and after reading chapter 325, it seemed that I had retreated from it for several years. I found this book again and read other books. I didn't say that this book was good and suitable for novices, mainly because there is a shortage of books... ||||||||||||||∞ ||||| ╭||||━━ ━━ ||||╮ ╰||| ~ |||╯ ||╰╭--╮ˋ╭--╮╯|| || ╰/ / ╯|| ОО

After I finished reading this book, I just want to say one thing. I thought he was a young man, but he turned out to be a king. But later I found out that all the previous ones were written by his father, only the beginning and the end were written by him!

At first, I said I would not fall in love for three years, but now I have more or less relationships with various women. Isn't it nice to just focus on my career? The more I watch, the more speechless I become

I stopped watching. The more I watched, the angrier I became. What do you think? Not having a good career?

It was well written, but it was a pity that it ended badly.

The writing is not reasonable for raising all human beings, and there are too many loopholes. The woman named Tang was clearly in the human world before, but later she became an elf.