Collect Features Starting from Giants

Seeing that there are no bright spots now, the more obvious poisonous points are that Will's face was pressed into the dirty water, the protagonist was pressed to the ground and rubbed helplessly, and there are too many entries. Just write the important ones, don't write them all, it will make people feel watery...

I skipped through the current one and found it pretty good, but the protagonist's performance when he was forced to join the Survey Corps was a bit... Hence the four stars.

Hurry up and write, it looks okay. Keep it up

There is too much data. If you can see the data, just write it down.