Ultra's Journey Begins with Eating Severn and Killing Him with One Shot
About This Novel
Professor Hikari, what do you think of the current expansion of the Space Guard from an elite team of seven to an army of one million people? This is a necessary quantity in order to maintain peace in the multiverse! So what do you think about Lord Metas using this power to build a new Kingdom of Light? The original Kingdom of Light was too conservative and was not conducive to the development of the universe. I support Metas! As a close friend of Lord Metas, can you tell us how Lord Metas embarked on such a path? Okay, it all started when he touched a plasma spark tower...
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Official(7)Scraped 10d ago
Forced darkness, an extra Presbyterian Church appeared inexplicably, what kind of urban fantasy are you writing?
I'm not a Maou fan, the Ultra Guards and the Ultra Brothers are indistinguishable, imposing settings
Weird and various plots
I'm speechless, all kinds of weird secondary characters are created, and they don't fit in with the original Ultraman world at all. I don't know, I thought I was watching Dragon Ball or some other Japanese comics. Originally, the bad guy should be damned, and the protagonist or something else just let him go forcibly and let him be whitewashed. I have lost my brain.
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Forcibly returning the darkness to the Holy Mother, the later stage will either be messy or unfinished
This book looks very good, but I'm afraid it will end up being either a eunuch or an anticlimactic one. There are fifty or sixty chapters so far, and the main background is still being laid out, and it's very grand. If one chapter is 2,000 words, the whole novel will not be less than nine hundred chapters, otherwise it will be anticlimactic and the ending will be very... The game often has the feeling of an outline, and this kind of Machiavellian dark wind can easily turn into a Long Aotian-style villain who forcibly defeats his wits. The beginning is not an invincible crushing flow, which requires that the protagonist and the villain have to talk and exchange moves, otherwise you will feel tired.
It's so frustrating to write. If you don't have the ability, don't jump like that in the early stage.
Not so good
I'm so confused that I can't understand.
The writing is good, but the plot is a bit off.
Rating
Community(0)
Official(7)Scraped 10d ago
Forced darkness, an extra Presbyterian Church appeared inexplicably, what kind of urban fantasy are you writing?
I'm not a Maou fan, the Ultra Guards and the Ultra Brothers are indistinguishable, imposing settings
Weird and various plots
I'm speechless, all kinds of weird secondary characters are created, and they don't fit in with the original Ultraman world at all. I don't know, I thought I was watching Dragon Ball or some other Japanese comics. Originally, the bad guy should be damned, and the protagonist or something else just let him go forcibly and let him be whitewashed. I have lost my brain.
. . . . .
Forcibly returning the darkness to the Holy Mother, the later stage will either be messy or unfinished
This book looks very good, but I'm afraid it will end up being either a eunuch or an anticlimactic one. There are fifty or sixty chapters so far, and the main background is still being laid out, and it's very grand. If one chapter is 2,000 words, the whole novel will not be less than nine hundred chapters, otherwise it will be anticlimactic and the ending will be very... The game often has the feeling of an outline, and this kind of Machiavellian dark wind can easily turn into a Long Aotian-style villain who forcibly defeats his wits. The beginning is not an invincible crushing flow, which requires that the protagonist and the villain have to talk and exchange moves, otherwise you will feel tired.
It's so frustrating to write. If you don't have the ability, don't jump like that in the early stage.
Not so good
I'm so confused that I can't understand.
The writing is good, but the plot is a bit off.
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