Useless Material to Cultivate Immortality, but Was Taken Away by the Ancestor at the Beginning
by Kong Ning
About This Novel
Su Nan, who could not feel spiritual power, was selected as the body-taking vessel for the ancestor of the immortal after participating in a game test session. But he didn't expect that Su Nan had a Dharma-ending physique and could only fight with Su Nan in the field of consciousness. Looking at the crumbling old man in front of her, Su Nan clenched her fists. I started lifting bricks when I was three years old, and I started shaking spoons when I was six years old. Why do you, a pampered immortal, fight with me?
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Official(1)Scraped 13d ago
It feels pretty good, please don't write too much
A story about a waste material that becomes the nightmare of all immortal cultivators The protagonist shuttles between the two worlds, using his own specialness to defeat all the masters step by step. At present, the top thug of the enemy camp has been killed, and a three-day appointment has been made with the opponent's boss. At the same time, he was targeted by a higher-level force in another world and was preparing for revenge. I suggest you write it faster. You can briefly mention some unnecessary experiences of the protagonist. When writing about some powerful enemies, I always feel that the characters appearing at this point are said to be powerful, but in fact they are not powerful at all. Anyway, keep going!
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Official(1)Scraped 13d ago
It feels pretty good, please don't write too much
A story about a waste material that becomes the nightmare of all immortal cultivators The protagonist shuttles between the two worlds, using his own specialness to defeat all the masters step by step. At present, the top thug of the enemy camp has been killed, and a three-day appointment has been made with the opponent's boss. At the same time, he was targeted by a higher-level force in another world and was preparing for revenge. I suggest you write it faster. You can briefly mention some unnecessary experiences of the protagonist. When writing about some powerful enemies, I always feel that the characters appearing at this point are said to be powerful, but in fact they are not powerful at all. Anyway, keep going!
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