
The Hatake Family's Three Swordsman Swordsman
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Traveling to the world of Naruto, he became the eldest son of the Hatake family and the brother of Kakashi. Completely integrate into the world of Naruto, fight to protect the family and friends around you, and bring permanent peace to the ninja world. New book: Pirates: Beginning asks Whitebeard who killed him Please support me guys~ System Invincible Flow A cool article with brains
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Asma's day
Early that morning, Asuma was walking to Yuhi Kurenai's house with an excited face. She felt very happy when she thought that starting from today, she and Yuhi Kurenai could be teammates and could be together every day. But he didn't notice that behind him, there was a mysterious figure, hiding where he couldn't see, making a weird smile at him. Just as he was passing by Konoha's most luxurious barbecue restaurant, he happened to encounter a carriage approaching. In the prosperous Konoha, it was normal to have such a carriage, so Asuma didn't pay much attention to it, but he was also impressed by the horse pulling the carriage and his strength. He hadn't seen such a strong horse in a long time. But when the figure behind him saw the carriage, his eyes lit up slightly, apparently thinking of something. "Genjutsu! Naraku no Jutsu!" This mysterious figure, just when Asuma and the carriage were about to pass each other, used an illusion on the sturdy Fire Country horse pulling the carriage. Poor Ma only felt that the scene in front of him suddenly changed. He actually appeared in a forest, and beside him was a colorful tiger, grinning at him. Under the sunlight, the tears flowed from the tiger's mouth, and the two rows of neat white teeth shone with a cold light. Looking at the tiger next to him, the horse clearly felt the threat of death, was a little frightened, and immediately kicked it. But when he kicked out, the scene in front of him suddenly changed back to the street he just walked on, as if everything just now was just an illusion. But what he didn't know was that the kick he just kicked did go out, but it wasn't the tiger that was hit. But a kid who just graduated from ninja school. At this time, the mysterious figure raised his head slightly. Under the sunlight, he was clearly the Jounin of Konoha. The sunset was really red, but why did he appear here?
The content is actually okay. But one thing is that the author's Konoha is too dark. In fact, Sarutobi Hiruzen, as a Ninja hero, has enough courage, and Danzo did not show his dark side in and before the Third War. As for the Akatsuki organization, facing the Rinnegan, which is infinitely close to nuclear weapons, no one can let him appear outside of control. As for White Fang, great masters have had to get rid of him since ancient times. Shinobu is not old yet, and he will never tolerate different voices within his power. Moreover, in the face of major tasks, companions seem insignificant at this moment, because failure may bring about the sacrifice of more companions, so it is still unknown whether it is the actions of the higher-ups. Regarding Hinata, the only thing wrong was the power. Looking at the Uchiha who also had blood stains on his body but no protective measures, you can see that power can mess with people's hearts. The necessary destruction was just a regrettable decision that had to be made. The Third World War was a place with relatively many poisonous points. The first was suppression. No politician without a clever mind would suppress senior generals who could lead the army to victory during the war. In history, these people all destroyed the country or died, or the people were deprived of life. Not to mention the politicians of the ninja world who have spent countless wars.
Very well written
The writing is relatively fluent, and the content is not trivial. It can be considered a good fanfic. I saw the author complaining in the chapter, and after reading the comment circle, I came here to support it. I have read it for 6000+ times, and I feel that this book is good.
Orochimaru would be great as Hokage. At least he can do better than Sarutobi. Just to mention it, I don't want to see Kakashi force the protagonist to rebel again, and then the plot follows the original plot. That would be very unpleasant.
Simply
Why did you let Obito live? Letting people survive without giving them a good ending makes them look like zombie mummies!
Lie
The author yourself said that Invincible has brains, but I couldn't even last five chapters. My scalp is numb due to poison, so don't be embarrassed to write if you can't express the feeling of passion. It's embarrassing to watch.
Of course Qianha Hatake would be frustrated in this situation. It would be fine in an ordinary family, but he was in a family of ninja geniuses. He was already eight years old, and he was not far away from that disaster. He must become stronger to protect his family
nice
Come on^0^~, I hope the author will not enter the palace😑😑
There's not much to say, it's just beautiful
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Official(64)Scraped 7d ago
Asma's day
Early that morning, Asuma was walking to Yuhi Kurenai's house with an excited face. She felt very happy when she thought that starting from today, she and Yuhi Kurenai could be teammates and could be together every day. But he didn't notice that behind him, there was a mysterious figure, hiding where he couldn't see, making a weird smile at him. Just as he was passing by Konoha's most luxurious barbecue restaurant, he happened to encounter a carriage approaching. In the prosperous Konoha, it was normal to have such a carriage, so Asuma didn't pay much attention to it, but he was also impressed by the horse pulling the carriage and his strength. He hadn't seen such a strong horse in a long time. But when the figure behind him saw the carriage, his eyes lit up slightly, apparently thinking of something. "Genjutsu! Naraku no Jutsu!" This mysterious figure, just when Asuma and the carriage were about to pass each other, used an illusion on the sturdy Fire Country horse pulling the carriage. Poor Ma only felt that the scene in front of him suddenly changed. He actually appeared in a forest, and beside him was a colorful tiger, grinning at him. Under the sunlight, the tears flowed from the tiger's mouth, and the two rows of neat white teeth shone with a cold light. Looking at the tiger next to him, the horse clearly felt the threat of death, was a little frightened, and immediately kicked it. But when he kicked out, the scene in front of him suddenly changed back to the street he just walked on, as if everything just now was just an illusion. But what he didn't know was that the kick he just kicked did go out, but it wasn't the tiger that was hit. But a kid who just graduated from ninja school. At this time, the mysterious figure raised his head slightly. Under the sunlight, he was clearly the Jounin of Konoha. The sunset was really red, but why did he appear here?
The content is actually okay. But one thing is that the author's Konoha is too dark. In fact, Sarutobi Hiruzen, as a Ninja hero, has enough courage, and Danzo did not show his dark side in and before the Third War. As for the Akatsuki organization, facing the Rinnegan, which is infinitely close to nuclear weapons, no one can let him appear outside of control. As for White Fang, great masters have had to get rid of him since ancient times. Shinobu is not old yet, and he will never tolerate different voices within his power. Moreover, in the face of major tasks, companions seem insignificant at this moment, because failure may bring about the sacrifice of more companions, so it is still unknown whether it is the actions of the higher-ups. Regarding Hinata, the only thing wrong was the power. Looking at the Uchiha who also had blood stains on his body but no protective measures, you can see that power can mess with people's hearts. The necessary destruction was just a regrettable decision that had to be made. The Third World War was a place with relatively many poisonous points. The first was suppression. No politician without a clever mind would suppress senior generals who could lead the army to victory during the war. In history, these people all destroyed the country or died, or the people were deprived of life. Not to mention the politicians of the ninja world who have spent countless wars.
Very well written
The writing is relatively fluent, and the content is not trivial. It can be considered a good fanfic. I saw the author complaining in the chapter, and after reading the comment circle, I came here to support it. I have read it for 6000+ times, and I feel that this book is good.
Orochimaru would be great as Hokage. At least he can do better than Sarutobi. Just to mention it, I don't want to see Kakashi force the protagonist to rebel again, and then the plot follows the original plot. That would be very unpleasant.
Simply
Why did you let Obito live? Letting people survive without giving them a good ending makes them look like zombie mummies!
Lie
The author yourself said that Invincible has brains, but I couldn't even last five chapters. My scalp is numb due to poison, so don't be embarrassed to write if you can't express the feeling of passion. It's embarrassing to watch.
Of course Qianha Hatake would be frustrated in this situation. It would be fine in an ordinary family, but he was in a family of ninja geniuses. He was already eight years old, and he was not far away from that disaster. He must become stronger to protect his family
nice
Come on^0^~, I hope the author will not enter the palace😑😑
There's not much to say, it's just beautiful



















