One Piece: Invasion of the Heavens
About This Novel
That year, a boy with a Zanpakutō appeared in front of the Whitebeard Pirates, and a group of Shinigami appeared on the sea. Later, a ninja village appeared in the country of Wano, and the navy established diplomatic relations with the sanctuary. The five old stars tried to obtain the immortal body of the ghost but were stopped by the demon slayer team. Shitian was sitting on the bow of the pirate ship, thinking about where to place the Great Tomb of Nazarick.
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Official(11)Scraped 3d ago
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This novel would be better if you didn't recognize Whitebeard as your father, or if you didn't recognize him in such an awkward way.
Crystal flame crystal flame crystal flame crystal flame
Too complicated
For now, write Death and Naruto into the One Piece world, and then you have to make sure there is no conflict in the power system, the time and place of appearance, the relationship between the characters, and the origins of Death and Naruto. Moreover, the thirteen divisions of the Shinigami, plus the Destroyers and Hollows, there are more people. And then there are more than just shadows representing the five villages of Hokage, and even Kakashi has been written. You have written too many people. And it's only chapter 20. Have you thought about the future plot? It's too confusing. Just the captain and vice-captain of the 13th Death God Division, strengthened destroyers and Hollows, and the original pirates are enough, because you are not writing this time-travel flow, you are writing the world fusion flow.
The writing is too complicated
At the beginning, there were only Shinigami and Naruto, without any weird branch plots. Then suddenly a lot of other templates were added at the end. Those who have seen it will naturally smile knowingly, but those who have not seen it will be confused and feel very confused. After writing Crimson Eyes, I wrote about the tutor. There is also a slippery ghost in the teacher. The plot is messy and the protagonist has no role.
I waited so long to read it, and you updated it to chapter 12?
I have been looking for this kind of subject for several years. I really like it, but there are not many people writing about it.
I think we should give the navy 100 million more combat capabilities. Now that there are so many combat capabilities out there, the navy is going to be useless.
Come on, the author writes very well
Come on, come on, I am currently short of books and must not be a eunuch! Merchant, I will subscribe
The subject matter is okay, big chaos. In fact, only the Dead Fire Sea can compete. Except for a few people like Esdeath, Red Red can fight against the Dead Fire Sea, but the rest can't. Demon Slayer is almost the same, the difference is that he doesn't have top-notch combat power. It may be possible to succeed Kokuenichi, but Mukai is still not qualified.
There is a saying that Yamamoto really can't beat Whitebeard, Yamamoto = Brother Ming, Monk = Kaer. Yuha" General Yonko, Ichigo Sanguinean Guards are probably on the level of Aokiji. Slightly inferior to Akainu. Akainu Kaido goes to the God of Death, Yuha can't come out, and he is basically invincible in a one-on-one fight Why is Yamamoto better than Ming Ge? Compared to Big Dog Wanjie, Little Oz, big dogs have no advantage in terms of strength or size. Byakuya in Soul Society is not as expressive as Lucci. Lucci = Soul Society Byakuya, Ming Ge and Yamamoto are not much different, and the Soul Society that destroys the back of the moon is obviously not as good as Whitebeard who destroys the world. . But then again, the author hasn't updated in almost two years, right?
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Community(0)
Official(11)Scraped 3d ago
pity
This novel would be better if you didn't recognize Whitebeard as your father, or if you didn't recognize him in such an awkward way.
Crystal flame crystal flame crystal flame crystal flame
Too complicated
For now, write Death and Naruto into the One Piece world, and then you have to make sure there is no conflict in the power system, the time and place of appearance, the relationship between the characters, and the origins of Death and Naruto. Moreover, the thirteen divisions of the Shinigami, plus the Destroyers and Hollows, there are more people. And then there are more than just shadows representing the five villages of Hokage, and even Kakashi has been written. You have written too many people. And it's only chapter 20. Have you thought about the future plot? It's too confusing. Just the captain and vice-captain of the 13th Death God Division, strengthened destroyers and Hollows, and the original pirates are enough, because you are not writing this time-travel flow, you are writing the world fusion flow.
The writing is too complicated
At the beginning, there were only Shinigami and Naruto, without any weird branch plots. Then suddenly a lot of other templates were added at the end. Those who have seen it will naturally smile knowingly, but those who have not seen it will be confused and feel very confused. After writing Crimson Eyes, I wrote about the tutor. There is also a slippery ghost in the teacher. The plot is messy and the protagonist has no role.
I waited so long to read it, and you updated it to chapter 12?
I have been looking for this kind of subject for several years. I really like it, but there are not many people writing about it.
I think we should give the navy 100 million more combat capabilities. Now that there are so many combat capabilities out there, the navy is going to be useless.
Come on, the author writes very well
Come on, come on, I am currently short of books and must not be a eunuch! Merchant, I will subscribe
The subject matter is okay, big chaos. In fact, only the Dead Fire Sea can compete. Except for a few people like Esdeath, Red Red can fight against the Dead Fire Sea, but the rest can't. Demon Slayer is almost the same, the difference is that he doesn't have top-notch combat power. It may be possible to succeed Kokuenichi, but Mukai is still not qualified.
There is a saying that Yamamoto really can't beat Whitebeard, Yamamoto = Brother Ming, Monk = Kaer. Yuha" General Yonko, Ichigo Sanguinean Guards are probably on the level of Aokiji. Slightly inferior to Akainu. Akainu Kaido goes to the God of Death, Yuha can't come out, and he is basically invincible in a one-on-one fight Why is Yamamoto better than Ming Ge? Compared to Big Dog Wanjie, Little Oz, big dogs have no advantage in terms of strength or size. Byakuya in Soul Society is not as expressive as Lucci. Lucci = Soul Society Byakuya, Ming Ge and Yamamoto are not much different, and the Soul Society that destroys the back of the moon is obviously not as good as Whitebeard who destroys the world. . But then again, the author hasn't updated in almost two years, right?
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