
Outer Eldest Brother
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Official(39)Scraped 7d ago
It's obviously good, why do you want to make a clone?
I feel like this book is going to be ruined by the doppelgänger
. . . . . .
Wouldn't it be the end of the world if we just quit the sect and go into seclusion without coming out? Anyway, if you need to add some points, that's it. Is Invincible Farming a good game?
It's better to give the protagonist a wife, he's already taken care of himself and he still doesn't have a wife😯
Author, could you please write down a table of cultivation realms? I'm confused when I read them.
Big jumping point
The first woman's writing is not good, please don't write it. Second Clone, don't you realize that what you wrote is a bit confusing and gives me a headache.
It was a very good book but it was written about clones. There were many people who didn't want to read the book after seeing the clones. This was even blocked later.
5151
Happy May Day to everyone! It's hard for the author to code words...
It can only be said that most people's external persona is different from their real personality. The external persona is the persona, and the personality is completely different from the personality. Most of them are like those who say that the personality and the external persona are the same. It almost feels like there aren't many anymore.
Don't switch back and forth frequently
You switch between your avatar and your true body at every turn. Your writing style is still out of control, so the first half of the chapter and the second half of the chapter are confusing to readers.
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Community(0)
Official(39)Scraped 7d ago
It's obviously good, why do you want to make a clone?
I feel like this book is going to be ruined by the doppelgänger
. . . . . .
Wouldn't it be the end of the world if we just quit the sect and go into seclusion without coming out? Anyway, if you need to add some points, that's it. Is Invincible Farming a good game?
It's better to give the protagonist a wife, he's already taken care of himself and he still doesn't have a wife😯
Author, could you please write down a table of cultivation realms? I'm confused when I read them.
Big jumping point
The first woman's writing is not good, please don't write it. Second Clone, don't you realize that what you wrote is a bit confusing and gives me a headache.
It was a very good book but it was written about clones. There were many people who didn't want to read the book after seeing the clones. This was even blocked later.
5151
Happy May Day to everyone! It's hard for the author to code words...
It can only be said that most people's external persona is different from their real personality. The external persona is the persona, and the personality is completely different from the personality. Most of them are like those who say that the personality and the external persona are the same. It almost feels like there aren't many anymore.
Don't switch back and forth frequently
You switch between your avatar and your true body at every turn. Your writing style is still out of control, so the first half of the chapter and the second half of the chapter are confusing to readers.


























