Panlong: Obtain Hongmeng Aura at the Beginning

Why have you brought a fw with you since Chapter 2? Don't you think about how to break through the holy realm and play house with a fw? Do you think it's reasonable for a ninth-level potential family to waste your cultivation time by arranging marriages instead of letting you break through to the Holy Realm early? Moreover, the family is still a garbage family that has never left the Holy Land. Shouldn't such a family want you to go to the Holy Land early to protect the safety of the family and expand its power?

If you didn't write about Demi being disgusting, the rating would probably be better. Nowadays, online writing is no longer suitable for this. The post-00s generation in the new era are all educated, and the Internet has been around for so many years. We have all the routines we should have, and we need to innovate. Otherwise it will make people vomit. Dog licking is the most disgusting thing now.

From the beginning, I saw that the family that was deliberately holding back the protagonist was actually the protagonist's parents, and I had no desire to continue reading. As the leaders of a large family, the protagonist's parents did not allow the protagonist to concentrate on improving his strength. They actually used marriage to deliberately hold back the protagonist and deliberately delayed the development of the family. It was completely inconsistent with basic logic.

Therefore, if the Panlong fanfic starts with Magnolia, I will never read it, and if the Devouring Starry Sky fanfic starts with Earth, I will never read it.

Is this considered plagiarism? How is it different from the original work? Just changed the name, and still entered the tribe, fought in the tribe, and entered the city to take the demon assessment. Even the tribe keeps a dragon.

Fans don't need too much preliminary preparation, as the original works have them all; for those who want to grow up and fight, writing about love and love will only make them crazy. .

Trash written. Suppress the protagonist's realm. More than a hundred chapters. The main character is talented. There are plug-ins and it's so rubbish. And also water. Return poison. .

There are too many copies of the original plot, and many places just changed the names 😂

Let's pass the time. There are several mistakes, such as 1. After the main god refines the main godhead, the original higher godhead will be replaced by the main godhead. When killed, only the main godhead will be exploded. The author wrote that the upper godhead can also be exploded; 2. From the upper god's breakthrough to the Great Consummation, the sky When the law of earth comes, the upper godhead will not emerge from the head to undergo transformation, because the power of will is given to the soul, not to the upper godhead. Otherwise, if Dzogchen is killed one day, whoever picks up their upper godhead and refines it will not directly become Dzogchen and still have the power of will? 3. The main god cannot create the material plane. The material plane is the direct birth of the universe. The main god can create the divine plane. In addition, he can also create continents on existing planes. . I won't give examples of other poisonous points, there are many more.

Writing a book should allow readers to immerse themselves in the world described by the author. This book is not like a novel, but like an instruction manual. I am afraid that others will not know what the author thinks. I summarize it in two words, which is a drama.