Konoha: There is a Kaguya Inside Me

Recently, many book friends in the comment area have been discussing the issue of Kurenai Yuhi, as well as the issue of a single female protagonist. In fact, I have already revealed part of the issue about Yuhi Kurenai in my opening remarks and my previous remarks at the end of the volume. The existence of Yuhi Hong was set up by me to sublimate the protagonist, in order to promote the protagonist's sublimation from human nature to divinity or god. After all, the protagonist and Konoha Village are not from the same side from the beginning. Konoha or the ninja world all want peace, and the protagonist's only goal is to save Kaguya. This is an unresolvable conflict point. Kaguya is very important to the protagonist. Let's take "Dragon Clan" as a simple example. In Dragon Clan, Lu Mingfei, as a poor boy, spent half of his life for his senior sister Nono, because Nono was the first person to break into and light up Lu Mingfei's world. After the protagonist traveled to the dangerous world of Naruto, he became a member of the Hyuga family. This is very cruel and dangerous. Because of a series of problems such as the caged bird, it is difficult for the protagonist to survive. Thinking about Naruto's next war and the destruction of villages, even ordinary people are not the safest! The arrival of Kaguya brings hope of life to the protagonist who has little hope of survival. She also indirectly saves the protagonist, so the protagonist's only goal is to rescue Kaguya from the seal. For the protagonist, as long as someone stops him from saving Kaguya, no matter who it is, he will die! Because Kaguya is very important in his mind Then there was the discussion in the comment area, saying that I let the protagonist have ambiguous contact with other women and then got disgusted, and also said that I gave away girls? ? What I want to say is where did you read the question and chapter about sending a girl away? Did I write these plots? ? If there is, please help me find it, okay. Also, they are not allowed to have ambiguous contact with other women. I wrote them to prepare the ground for the subsequent plot. But you said that there are too many ambiguous contacts with other women. So can't you write other female characters with a single female protagonist? Is it true that if there is only one female character in the entire novel, it would be considered a single-female protagonist in your mind? For me, I just want to finish writing this book quietly. Whether it is a genuine reader or a pirated version, it is very important to me. The genuine readers have given me subscriptions, and I will try my best to repay them with high-quality articles. I also hope that I can use high-quality writing to bring pirated readers back to genuine subscriptions. I will not create any anti-piracy chapters. This will be uncomfortable for both genuine and pirated readers, and my own subscription will also be affected. Another thing about this book is that it is a slow-burning novel. It is not fast-paced. It is too fast and I can't control it. When the time comes, people won't like to read it, so my pace is very slow. Everyone in the group knows that for me now, four thousand words a day is the limit. If it is more, the quality of my code will definitely decrease. By the way, let's talk about the rules of the comment area. PS: Don't post life attacks in the book review area. If you see it, you will block it! ! PS2: Don't divert traffic or advertise, you won't block but will delete it (there are a lot of advertisements, I didn't set the fan value, it is so that everyone can chat and post book reviews! The advertisements are deleted manually and by the starting point mechanism, sometimes they can't be deleted!) If you still have any doubts, you can go to Junyang. I have put it on the shelf. If you don't want to enter, just post it in the comment area. I will read it and reply when I have time! That's it, basically nothing more to say!

It's okay, it's a bit noob, but it's not that I can't see it, it's okay. Writing skills are developed over time, so just write slowly. Also, I haven't watched much of Naruto. When I saw Kaguya, I just watched it because of the ability setting. How could I watch it because of Kaguya😊

The story is mediocre and nothing outstanding. It's not my cup of tea. I haven't read much of it. After a few chapters, I want to express my opinions on several shortcomings of this book. First of all, the first point is the core theme of the story: after a few chapters, what I saw was basically about practicing to become stronger, showing off, and being in the sky! I am the only one! What about the content anyway? 100% Pure flowing water. Let me explain this in the simplest way, using the example of (｢･ω･)｢Millet. Last year's most popular Naruto fanfic (this ninja is obviously not strong but is seeking death too much) tells the story around the word "seeking death". It can be said that from the beginning to the end, not to mention 100%, 80% is centered around the theme. Even though the style is average, there are a lot of daily words, and the writing is broken in the later period, he still relies on focusing on the "theme" to reach the top ten in the monthly vote list. The second point is style: some books are humorous, some are dark and depressing, and some are heartwarming. I have been reading novels for at least ten years. If the theme is the bones that support the human body, then style is an indispensable internal organ. Those who can make a debut with their personal style are the big guys, so there is no need to mention them. Let's talk directly about the Muggle style of the public: for example, my favorite themes are bizarre, unscrupulous, and relatively simple and light-hearted. When talking about style, we have to mention the three elements of a novel: characters, setting, and plot. I personally think that the background and plot account for 10% of the overall style, and the remaining 80% lies in the characters. Take the characters in this book as an example: First of all, the setting of the protagonist is very greasy and disgusting. Because of the characters and the too smooth plot, it is impossible to leave a specific impression on people, and he also maintains an ambiguous relationship with the female character. If the characters and the plot could be changed, for example, Kaguya Otsutsuki would be replaced by the idiot Senju Hashirama, and the weak old red would be replaced by the poisonous-tongued Anko Mitarai. The plot of becoming stronger through training and pretending to be slapped in the face would be replaced by Senju Hashirama's speech, the protagonist would helplessly attack and complain, Mitarashi Anko's evil prank, and the protagonist would trick her into jumping into the trap. This creates a relaxed and funny style.

Why do you want a single female protagonist? Isn't it nice to include Kaguya, Tsunade Konan and so on?

I have never seen such a pretentious person teach you ninjutsu. I wonder if you deliberately wrote that he has 7 types of chakra?

Tsunade suffers from dizziness, so how does she cope with the relatives who come every month?

Kaguya, my favorite, ah ah ah ah

The beginning was okay. It was quite interesting since the village rebellion started. I had no motivation to read anymore. You killed everyone in Konoha and defeated the ninja world. Why not just collect the tailed beasts and resurrect the night machine? If the protagonist has concerns, then he should defect quietly. It is best to fake his death. I really don't understand the purpose of the protagonist making a big fuss in Konoha. Are you just showing off? ? ? Expose yourself without any worries just to show off, with no purpose at all? ? He was saying that he couldn't beat the Six Paths Sage Tailed Beasts without even collecting them, while he was pretending to be cool in Konoha. It's meaningless. Author: Don't you have an outline when writing a book? The oral pleasure is too much. Force an explanation?

Tell me, what kind of inappropriate relationship do you two have?

Some people like to watch comedy, satirical, venomous, shady, etc. But some people don't like this kind of Japanese comic-style plot. When writing novels and reading novels, don't mention style or not. As long as the preface is not inconsistent with the afterword, the writing is smooth and fluent, as long as there is a story. When writing a novel, the longer it is, the better. No matter how rubbish it is, as long as you can serialize it for 5 years and write tens of millions of words, it will be a masterpiece and you will be famous. If you are touching, you will become more famous The author writes a good beginning of this book. The protagonist and Kaguya have a special dependence on each other. No matter whether others are warm or not, as a reader, I think warm is enough. There is also the task of protecting the daimyo's daughter. Isn't it unique? After reading so many Naruto fanfics, I never expected that there is actually the soul of an old woman. This is quite touching and the writing is very successful. But no matter what, this book by the author can be said to be a good start. Who knows what will happen next, as long as it is not a prison.