Douluo: Go Against Heaven and Become the Living Bone King

So far, the details have been handled very Muggle-like, and the overall feeling is average. A good work should be more holistic. It should not just look at a few lines. The world is very big. As the impact of the protagonist's actions expands, different forces should have different reactions and feedback. The protagonist has already had a great influence on the world, but Wuhun Palace is still taking step-by-step actions, and the Star Luo Empire has no description like the original work (the original work also has a dull overall description, mainly because the competitiveness was not that great during that time period) It seems that other people have no thoughts, wills, and psychological descriptions of their own. Like NPCs, they can only respond with the intervention of the protagonist. All members are mentally retarded. It can't be considered bad, but I can't give a particularly good rating. I can only say it's average, a little better than some pure parallel imports. I had no sense of expectation when I watched it, and I didn't want to guess the plot, because there is no branch line, only the protagonist's line, and no twists. You can tell what will happen next at a glance, so you don't need to guess at all, and there is no suspense. Not bad, not exciting, just mediocre

Enlisted in the army, everyone is destined to meet again. Free applications for the book have been opened. I am very sorry about the plot. After all, it is expected to be a 1.5 Million-word novel. So far, only Dou Yi has been written, so the ending may make everyone feel a little uncomfortable, but this is fate, and it belongs to He Ren. Goodbye! ! !

Is there anything wrong with your mind? When the protagonist has no soul power, he causes so much trouble and so many people fall for him? Full blood is everywhere, I won't say there are too many, there are so many divine grasses, every one is eaten without saying a word, but in the whole new system in the 40s, if you compete with Tang San for development speed, you still have to do it when others are full of opportunities. If you don't have a brain, you don't have a brain. Don't write this kind of egg book.

The author's bad name is a bad thing. When I saw the name of this book, I thought the protagonist had hundreds of soul bones at the beginning, and then gave them away everywhere. This plot made me cross it several times and didn't want to read it. If you write the title of the book as a specific number like "I Have 206 Soul Bones", it will give people a completely different meaning. At least it will no longer give people the feeling of a studio flow and cool writing.

Tang San's first disciple had no soul power. He still couldn't defeat Dugu Bo after more than thirty years. He pretended to be a master of theory, but he was no better than Yu Xiaogang. He was a researcher who specialized in solving the flaws of martial souls. Just knocking on a thousand-year-old or ten-thousand-year-old ginseng was not much better than changing bones.

Author, do you want to write the protagonist to have Dou skills and travel to Dou Er and Dou Three and Dou Si? Can I have a harem? If it works, I'll add it.

It's nothing like what I wrote. First of all, Xuantian Gong can cultivate soul power without soul power. Secondly, you can make an artificial soul bone to replace your own bones. What are the settings? ? After the bones are replaced, the bones absorb the soul power by themselves? ? Grow on your own? ? After getting dozens of junk bones and replacing them, you can have the power of Soul Emperor and Soul Saint? ? Most of your bones don't even have a lifespan, and the rest of them are at best hundreds of years old. . . According to what you wrote, with 100,000-year-old soul bones, is Bibi Dong invincible? ?

It was so hastily ended that it didn't look good at all, and she was killed by Shina.

Rakshasa is a woman, okay? Which boy? It just sucks, **? The soul bone system is also in a mess. Will the entire Phoenix Martial Spirit be released in the end?

That's all. The background will be written until Dou Si. Please add a bookshelf ヽ(爱´∀'爱)ノ