There is a Secret Place Here

[Author's Recommendation] A novel with a serious conflict of styles. The main content is that when the protagonist was a child, he went to a primitive tribe in a dream because of a sheep's horn, and the totem in the tribe was passed down. When he grew up, he was born as a human, but he had the magical power of mountains and seas that only demons could have. He would not die even if the Dharma was destroyed, which was very unique. Regarding this book, I just want to say... It is good to have original ideas, but once it is original, the work needs to give readers a certain amount of space to slowly understand the world view and power system. What is the problem with this book? First of all, the perspective of the first chapter changes too frequently, from childhood to dreams to later, all piled up in just three thousand words. It is difficult for readers to receive so much information in such a short space. This is the first point. The second thing is that there are too many uncommon words, and online articles are actually the most taboo with uncommon words. In just three chapters, there are more than 10 uncommon words, which further increases the reader's understanding cost. A more serious problem is the conflict of writing styles mentioned above. The author uses many half-text and half-white sentences in the book, such as: "The pillar is engraved with totems of mountains and seas. The terrain of mountains and seas is similar to that of sheep. It is like Huanghuang Tianzheng, which is invisible. Its name is Mei, which belongs to earth. From sheep to big, Shengye, Fengye, the righteous master of Yang Qi, and the first king of things." But in the next few sentences, something suddenly came to light. A strange sentence: "Bailing is arrogant by nature. He was caught by the human in front of him for no reason. If he soils the beautiful feathers of the Za family, he will lose the right to mate tonight, and he will still be a bird! Xunfeng·Dabobo" The whole article was originally half-written and half-white, with a slightly high-minded writing style, but suddenly there was a forced comedy that was not funny. This conflict of writing style is really outrageous, and it is a big poisonous point. Friends who are interested can read this book~