Before I Died, I Forcefully Kissed the Demon Empress
by Storm Sniper
About This Novel
Xu Fan was invited to participate in the closed beta experience of the world's first virtual reality game "Zhushen". Just as he was fighting the Demon Empress "Tang Yanling" for three days and three nights, he suddenly received an official notice that the game had decided to delete files in advance and end the closed beta. "So I played for three days and three nights, and you told me to delete the files in advance?" Xu Fan's mentality exploded on the spot. Five minutes before the file was deleted, Xu Fan got angry and threw away the sword in his hand. His chest was pierced by the Empress's sharp blade. He used his last strength to slap Tang Beiwei on the face, destroying her Taoism. Xu Fan was in a happy mood after returning to reality. Although she failed to kill the big devil, her Taoist heart was finally stained. Just as he was about to return to his normal life, a cold-looking woman broke through the void with a sword and came to him... Xu Fan: "???!!"
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Official(11)Scraped 6d ago
I don't know what motivated you to write it down.
I can only say that your book is not attractive to people. The subject matter is a bit fresh, but your content is not interesting. I can't even read the ordinary text.
It feels okay. I hope the empress and the hero have a happy ending.
If there are some novels and other labors, wouldn't the earth we bear be the ancestral land of the human race?
I suggest that you put more effort into the emotional interaction between the male and female protagonists, and stop being distracted by the supporting characters. I am looking at the emotional interaction between the male and female protagonists, not the interaction between the male and female protagonists and the supporting characters. If the subsequent narrative techniques are still the same as those of Feng Yi's dozen chapters, does it deserve the title of the book?
I have read another similar book
There is another book in this book called I Forcibly Kissed the Empress Before I Die. The first dozen chapters are exactly the same, except for the names of the male and female protagonists. The female protagonist is named Tang Sisi. That book may be worse than the author.
Why doesn't the author publish on other platforms? I feel like more people will watch it.
Looks good but updates too slowly
Although some of the writing is not good, overall it is still quite good. It's just that the updates are too slow. But I will always support the author
The male protagonist is too wretched, and the female protagonist is made to look like an idiot
The more I read, the more I get addicted. I can't stop. The author will update it soon.
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Community(0)
Official(11)Scraped 6d ago
I don't know what motivated you to write it down.
I can only say that your book is not attractive to people. The subject matter is a bit fresh, but your content is not interesting. I can't even read the ordinary text.
It feels okay. I hope the empress and the hero have a happy ending.
If there are some novels and other labors, wouldn't the earth we bear be the ancestral land of the human race?
I suggest that you put more effort into the emotional interaction between the male and female protagonists, and stop being distracted by the supporting characters. I am looking at the emotional interaction between the male and female protagonists, not the interaction between the male and female protagonists and the supporting characters. If the subsequent narrative techniques are still the same as those of Feng Yi's dozen chapters, does it deserve the title of the book?
I have read another similar book
There is another book in this book called I Forcibly Kissed the Empress Before I Die. The first dozen chapters are exactly the same, except for the names of the male and female protagonists. The female protagonist is named Tang Sisi. That book may be worse than the author.
Why doesn't the author publish on other platforms? I feel like more people will watch it.
Looks good but updates too slowly
Although some of the writing is not good, overall it is still quite good. It's just that the updates are too slow. But I will always support the author
The male protagonist is too wretched, and the female protagonist is made to look like an idiot
The more I read, the more I get addicted. I can't stop. The author will update it soon.
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