The American Comic Life I'm Thinking About

The author's subject matter is good. But the writing is not enough. I was attracted to it by the introduction. It looked good at first, but the more I read, the more I felt emotionally drained. Contrary to common sense Let me mention a few shortcomings. 1. The author's world view is huge. But also because the world view is huge, the power system will be very confusing. The DC world and the Marvel world are plagiarized worlds, and due to problems with comic book writers, the power system is extremely confusing. One world is already chaotic enough, but you write two worlds together without determining the assessment of power. You may not feel it at first when you read it, but you will feel it after reading for a while. Mentally a bit confused. The author could start by just writing about the cinematic universe. When the power is accumulated, then develop the multiverse power system and improve step by step. The current situation is that the author has made the world view very large and the power system very high. But all of a sudden, Tony Stark is written as a capitalist, very smart and powerful. I can't read other novels, and write him as mentally retarded, and write S. H. I. E. L. D. As stupid. It makes people feel separated. 2. Has the author determined what the protagonist's character is like? You may not feel it at first, but halfway through reading, you will feel that the protagonist's character is very holy. And it doesn't match up with the previous article at all. When I was in China, I was invisible and hid here and there to avoid being discovered by government departments. Once I went abroad, my temperament changed drastically and I became a holy mother, saving people and teaching people everywhere. Is that still the same person? It was a drama immediately. And does the author have any misunderstanding about otakus? Are otakus just otakus and not stupid? When you have no power to protect yourself, you push out the Ark reactor. Are you sure Tony Stark will not kill you but cooperate with you? If this is the case, how do you live so long? Don't tell me that you know Tony wouldn't do this just from watching the movie. You said Tony is a capitalist. Be realistic. Still so naive. When I saw this, I was a little surprised. I don't want to write the rest, there are too many. Typing on the phone is so painful.

My own evaluation of this book before it was put on the shelves was: it has merits, but it cannot make up for the shortcomings. Advantages: Scientific research, the protagonist's main ability in the early stage, and also his only ability. With the power of thinking, he can create plug-ins, and the author has also checked a lot of information, and I can see Create your own power, regular operations of American comics It is advisable to train your own subordinates Undesirable: First, the self-ability is not strong and the hero loves to wander. He has no resources in the early stage. It is understandable to take risks and find Stark, but later it becomes more and more unreasonable and self-contradictory. First, the self-ability is not strong: the current abilities of some protagonists before they are put on the shelves are the power of thinking, but they have no combat power. The second is the luminescence of lv:1 developed by the brain, which also has no combat power. Then there is the transformation of smart watches. Change the function, it's okay, it has combat effectiveness, and it combines with light to have combat effectiveness, but it's not high and it takes time to convert. It can make knight belts, it has artificial intelligence, but it has no combat effectiveness. The combat effectiveness is all in the knight belt of the bodyguard group, but it doesn't develop other accessories. It has Stark as a backer, but it's not strong enough. Whenever there is an organization with heavy rocket launcher firepower that wants to kill the protagonist, it's enough to fight head-on. A little while is enough. The protagonist's combat effectiveness is too low. The second point: Ai Lang, as soon as he built the first G3, he directly held a press conference, openly discriminated against mutants, and at the same time provoked the underworld without any fighting power. He was openly exposed to the eyes of the top leaders of various organizations without any strength. When he first met Professor The S. H. I. E. L. D. Trident Building, the Vampire Bar, and the prison, just go there without fear of an ambush and throw yourself into it. Moreover, the protagonist's opponent was like a fool. There were no more than three fights in total, and one of them was still clearing out the miscellaneous soldiers. The first time the fool was beaten, he used his body to resist without moving a step. The second fool saw the protagonist rushing towards him, but he didn't move and was directly dragged into the mirror world. The third point: The belt never needs to be used for the third time, and it must be the first one. Rubbing photon blood with my hands in the cave is nothing. After all, the smart gang provides the materials and I have the power of thinking. But, after rubbing, I have cleared two soldiers in total, so I gave it to the watch. The blank dragon riding belt is also the same. I have a few words with the Taskmaster and talk about a bodyguard. For business, I just threw the card box to others. The kiva didn't touch it and gave it directly to Blade. But we can't understand. It's more like using other people's strength to do it. But you don't spend all day in the research room thinking about how to improve yourself. Instead, you post everywhere. Today you will post with SHIELD, and tomorrow you will post with the military. Alas! Just love walking! Then there is the self-contradiction, ah, "I said in advance that I am not the one who puts the interests of mankind first" and then turns around to "I just want mankind to reach the top" in S. H. I. E. L. D. If you are not contradictory, who is? Okay, this is my situation after reading the part before it was put on the shelf. Overall, it's just like the same sentence. It has merits, but it doesn't make up for the shortcomings.

The protagonist is a bit of a virgin bitch, trying to save everyone, and it doesn't feel good to watch at all.

I originally wanted to see the protagonist build an Academy City in the American comics, but even after watching only half of it, I felt that the protagonist had no IQ and that all his talent was in scientific research. And why do you, a scientist, always join in the fun? If you can't make a robot with your own appearance, you can always do it. The protagonist's ability can definitely handle the details of the issue well. Also, the protagonist is too much of a virgin. He who tries his best for others is a hero. How can you, a scientist, join in the fun?

Really, you Kamen Riders are embarrassed to see thieves. You can't see it. When you see the person who wrote Kamen Rider, a group of men in leather clothes fighting will appear in your mind. Just like Halloween in foreign countries, there are all kinds of monsters and monsters.

It was okay in the early stage, but I couldn't understand the author's brain circuit at all in the middle stage. For example, in Chapter 200, Gwen was bitten, and then how the protagonist and Laitu wanted to hide it from a just police chief and then cause trouble. Isn't it true that these two idiots tricked the police chief? How wrong they were. Also, Spider-Man in the protagonist's book also had his brain taken away. My own problems almost caused a war between two parallel worlds. I didn't think about my own problems, but I thought I was okay. The opponent was the enemy, so I should grab the genes from the other side.

It was good in the early stage, but it became more and more awkward later on.

Come on, I hope the author can stick to it