Dragon Clan: Rebirth: Urban Immortal Cultivator Lu Mingfei

Dragon Clan: Rebirth: Urban Immortal Cultivator Lu Mingfei

by One Page Of Thick Paper

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756Kwords235chapters
Latest:
Ch. 235Final Chapter: the Golden Pill is Successful (6k)
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Updated 7mo agoScraped 19d ago
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New book in preparation

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Rhine 032312mo ago

I haven't read this book yet, but if it's the Tianzun I understand, not only looking down at the past and present from the river of time, at least I can read the memories of everyone in the world.

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Book Friends 20240915121_bc6mo ago

There is no need for Lu Mingfei to go to school, directly control other people and obtain various resources, and there is no need to join the dragon-slaying cause. The only goal now is to practice, to improve his cultivation level in the shortest time, and everything will be solved easily. Unfortunately, this is the best choice for the protagonist and a bad choice for the author, and readers don't like the author writing this way. I read all kinds of fanfics about Lu Mingfei who returned from other places. The character portrayal of Lu Mingfei in the article is a piece of shit. The character of the original protagonist is the character that the fanfic author wants and can portray. The readers hope that the protagonist will change the tragedy. So there is such a dramatic scene. Lu Mingfei, who has gained power from other worlds, has just come back to save Chu Zihang. With Chu Tianjiao, I just can't figure it out. At this point in time, the relationship between Lu Mingfei and Chu Zihang should be that they are strangers who know each other's names. Logically speaking, the protagonist's character will never save such a stranger, but readers hope that the protagonist can save him. This leads to conflicts in the protagonist's personality, and once the protagonist's personality is separated, the story will not be a good story. I suggest that the author should just write his own new book. Fan fiction has no future. Of course, the author wrote this article because he wanted to change the tragedy of the original work, but I didn't say that.

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May the Stars on the Sea Not Be Enemies12mo ago

In my opinion, Lu Mingfei had no contact with Chu Zihang before he was reborn. Then when you come back and see him, isn't it strange that you call him senior brother? Not to mention that ordinary people would ignore it, and they would not call it so kindly. It is really strange to know that after practicing for such a long time, you can still call an ordinary person your senior brother when you come back.

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Xia Mi (`δ') is in Trouble12mo ago

About the Author Who has multiple female protagonists?

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Love is Like the Wind4mo ago

One on the roadside

The three views are incorrect, the content is empty and meaningless

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Mr. Tongda5mo ago

Public places hahahahahahahahahahahaha

666666666 Repeated method of inguinal canal during meals

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Sercurious7mo ago

Not bad, pretty good-looking. Nice fanfic.

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