
Do You Know That it Starts with the Concubine of the Yuan Family?
About This Novel
A new book has been released "Do you know it starts with the legitimate son of the Gu family" When I woke up and became the concubine of Uncle Zhongqin, I thought I was getting the script of a palace fight in the inner house. But I didn't expect that the brothers and brothers were harmonious and the family was harmonious. Since the script was wrong, I had to change it myself. It was his lifelong wish to be granted the title of Marquis and to seal off all lands.
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Official(25)Scraped 7d ago
The more I look at it, the more wrong it becomes...
Author, please tell me if Minglan is a time traveler in your book. If so, just pretend I didn't ask. If not, then would Minglan let the protagonist kiss before getting married? Even if they are already engaged, you have to make it clear that this is ancient times, not modern times. Your writing is too ridiculous. Isn't the protagonist afraid that Sheng Hong will fight for the protagonist by doing this? You have to know what Sheng Hong values most... Can you write ancient novels without using modern things? Very awkward...
Is the protagonist a little too unrestrained?
Living in the woman's house before getting married. Author, you have to be clear that this is ancient times, not modern times. The protagonist does this because he is probably not trying to make the woman's family famous...
Seeing that Tian Sheng Minglan is like a dog in the future, he still can't control his family's life, wealth and other things.
Is the wife strict? ? ? Everything revolves around her. Is it possible that Minglan is the protagonist? ? ? Is this a female video? ? ? ? ?
I am coming
Sheng Minglan is not a simple woman for the protagonist. She is the driving force for the protagonist's struggle. For example, it is a dream. What will happen if you fulfill your dream😄
Congratulations to the author for being discovered by me and being the first to check in.
I haven't read it yet. I hope it's a good book. I haven't read the original work.
This author is unusual
After reading through it, I found that the author's sentences are different from those of ordinary people, or in other words, different from mine. There are places where he should break sentences, and there are places where he shouldn't.
Next, the author has never seen a woman, right? A dignified earl would have to become a dog licker if he couldn't find any kind of woman.
Very good, a novel that you can read slowly
I love you dear author,
How many words does the author plan to write? I love you so much.
I saw the first chapter, and this is how the protagonist was introduced. At first glance, he didn't look outstanding, but upon closer inspection, he had a heroic aura. Doesn't this mean that the introducer was ugly and big? I was persuaded to leave.
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Official(25)Scraped 7d ago
The more I look at it, the more wrong it becomes...
Author, please tell me if Minglan is a time traveler in your book. If so, just pretend I didn't ask. If not, then would Minglan let the protagonist kiss before getting married? Even if they are already engaged, you have to make it clear that this is ancient times, not modern times. Your writing is too ridiculous. Isn't the protagonist afraid that Sheng Hong will fight for the protagonist by doing this? You have to know what Sheng Hong values most... Can you write ancient novels without using modern things? Very awkward...
Is the protagonist a little too unrestrained?
Living in the woman's house before getting married. Author, you have to be clear that this is ancient times, not modern times. The protagonist does this because he is probably not trying to make the woman's family famous...
Seeing that Tian Sheng Minglan is like a dog in the future, he still can't control his family's life, wealth and other things.
Is the wife strict? ? ? Everything revolves around her. Is it possible that Minglan is the protagonist? ? ? Is this a female video? ? ? ? ?
I am coming
Sheng Minglan is not a simple woman for the protagonist. She is the driving force for the protagonist's struggle. For example, it is a dream. What will happen if you fulfill your dream😄
Congratulations to the author for being discovered by me and being the first to check in.
I haven't read it yet. I hope it's a good book. I haven't read the original work.
This author is unusual
After reading through it, I found that the author's sentences are different from those of ordinary people, or in other words, different from mine. There are places where he should break sentences, and there are places where he shouldn't.
Next, the author has never seen a woman, right? A dignified earl would have to become a dog licker if he couldn't find any kind of woman.
Very good, a novel that you can read slowly
I love you dear author,
How many words does the author plan to write? I love you so much.
I saw the first chapter, and this is how the protagonist was introduced. At first glance, he didn't look outstanding, but upon closer inspection, he had a heroic aura. Doesn't this mean that the introducer was ugly and big? I was persuaded to leave.












