Under One Person: I, Jin Shining
About This Novel
[Fame under one person] Traveling to a world under one person, Su Mo awakened to the "Noble Phantasm Refining" and worked with others to refine the Noble Phantasm. Some years later. Su Mo was wearing the 'Sun Armor' and stood on the street lights of the royal city, looking down at the alien coalition below. "A bunch of bastards, because of you, the world has become filthy again!" With a snap of his fingers, the 'King's Treasure House' opened, golden light appeared in the sky, and a torrent of tens of thousands of Noble Phantasms headed toward the alien coalition forces below to bombard them. Then Su Mo took out a strange-looking golden key again. "The star that opened up the sky and the earth!" Zhang Chulan hugged Su Mo in time: "Brother, brother, don't turn it up, the island is going to sink."
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Official(31)Scraped 13d ago
The previous writing was very good, but when I read Chapter 20, I was so poisoned by a passage that I completely broke my guard.
Give it three stars, neither high nor low. After all, the first chapter is very good, but I can't understand it after chapter 20. You can't hurt ordinary people even if you die, and you have to swear an oath even if you promise verbally. I can't understand this sentence. If an ordinary person really hurts you, no matter what he does, you can be forgiven, right? No matter what he does, even if he kills the people around you, you can't hurt him. When a girl whose mind is like a blank sheet of paper and very obedient to your orders says this, I can't imagine what kind of impact it will have on her character in the future. I really can't stand the poisonous point of this sentence. You can't hurt it even if you die. If there are ordinary people next to you during the battle, if you use your full strength, you may be affected, but if you don't use your full strength, you will die. What choice will you make? To be honest, this fan novel is a very good one among all the fan novels I have read, but it is also the first one that can make me break my guard just because of one sentence. Of course, there is also the reason why I treat her as the heroine. If she is not the heroine, the break may not be so serious. It is a female character. The words of the Lord were directly poisoned to death. I can't imagine saying such words to my future wife that can affect her life. When I read novels, I think my anti-virus ability is not bad, but you are the first author who can make me abandon the book after just one sentence. I admire you. You know, with my anti-virus ability, even if it is a holy book, I can read several chapters.
The protagonist's ability feels the same as that of Drawing the Void, not like Shining.
Sakura Manji draws the weapon from the chest, and the protagonist also draws the weapon from the chest. Sakura Manji draws the weapon and the person is comatose, and the protagonist draws the weapon and the person is also comatose, so the protagonist's ability = the power of the king, and it can be seen that they have never appeared at the same time, so the protagonist = Yingmanji.
Interesting and unmeasured.
A work is not afraid of the protagonist killing people. The most fearful thing is that the protagonist is a judge who judges life without any measure, and this kind of judgment still comes from revenge killing, which is very immature and even distorts human society. In the words of Demon Slayer, what do you think of human life? From the warm foreshadowing in the early stage to the arbitrary treatment of humans and dogs in the later stage. Very polarizing.
Even if Chen Duo dies, he cannot harm ordinary people.
Since the protagonist has always been by Chen Duo's side, what's the point of asking her to swear.
Why do you have to worry about Chen Duo? So holy? If you ask me, living well is better than anything else. No matter how floods come, as long as I am fine, it doesn't matter who dies.
The presence of pig's feet is the filthy stain of fragile and crooked thinking. Perverted thoughts.
The author gave it a low score because you asked Chen Duo to swear.
I don't want to say anything more, this sentence is too poisonous.
Here's some advice for you: take some time before writing, read more about Under One Person and Fate, and reply if you see it.
It's a bit poisonous after it's put on the shelves. Which one of Fengshayan is more poisonous?
I feel like this combination is ridiculous🤗, not everything can be inserted randomly
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Official(31)Scraped 13d ago
The previous writing was very good, but when I read Chapter 20, I was so poisoned by a passage that I completely broke my guard.
Give it three stars, neither high nor low. After all, the first chapter is very good, but I can't understand it after chapter 20. You can't hurt ordinary people even if you die, and you have to swear an oath even if you promise verbally. I can't understand this sentence. If an ordinary person really hurts you, no matter what he does, you can be forgiven, right? No matter what he does, even if he kills the people around you, you can't hurt him. When a girl whose mind is like a blank sheet of paper and very obedient to your orders says this, I can't imagine what kind of impact it will have on her character in the future. I really can't stand the poisonous point of this sentence. You can't hurt it even if you die. If there are ordinary people next to you during the battle, if you use your full strength, you may be affected, but if you don't use your full strength, you will die. What choice will you make? To be honest, this fan novel is a very good one among all the fan novels I have read, but it is also the first one that can make me break my guard just because of one sentence. Of course, there is also the reason why I treat her as the heroine. If she is not the heroine, the break may not be so serious. It is a female character. The words of the Lord were directly poisoned to death. I can't imagine saying such words to my future wife that can affect her life. When I read novels, I think my anti-virus ability is not bad, but you are the first author who can make me abandon the book after just one sentence. I admire you. You know, with my anti-virus ability, even if it is a holy book, I can read several chapters.
The protagonist's ability feels the same as that of Drawing the Void, not like Shining.
Sakura Manji draws the weapon from the chest, and the protagonist also draws the weapon from the chest. Sakura Manji draws the weapon and the person is comatose, and the protagonist draws the weapon and the person is also comatose, so the protagonist's ability = the power of the king, and it can be seen that they have never appeared at the same time, so the protagonist = Yingmanji.
Interesting and unmeasured.
A work is not afraid of the protagonist killing people. The most fearful thing is that the protagonist is a judge who judges life without any measure, and this kind of judgment still comes from revenge killing, which is very immature and even distorts human society. In the words of Demon Slayer, what do you think of human life? From the warm foreshadowing in the early stage to the arbitrary treatment of humans and dogs in the later stage. Very polarizing.
Even if Chen Duo dies, he cannot harm ordinary people.
Since the protagonist has always been by Chen Duo's side, what's the point of asking her to swear.
Why do you have to worry about Chen Duo? So holy? If you ask me, living well is better than anything else. No matter how floods come, as long as I am fine, it doesn't matter who dies.
The presence of pig's feet is the filthy stain of fragile and crooked thinking. Perverted thoughts.
The author gave it a low score because you asked Chen Duo to swear.
I don't want to say anything more, this sentence is too poisonous.
Here's some advice for you: take some time before writing, read more about Under One Person and Fate, and reply if you see it.
It's a bit poisonous after it's put on the shelves. Which one of Fengshayan is more poisonous?
I feel like this combination is ridiculous🤗, not everything can be inserted randomly
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